唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions freely. Sometimes, singing helps me release my feelings and feel more relaxed.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ hơn về hoàn cảnh của bạn.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally because my parents couldn't afford singing lessons when I was younger.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ lặp lại. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: I would like to sing for my girlfriend and my best friend because they understand me well and appreciate my singing.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và giải thích ý tưởng một cách logic.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. Although sometimes it expresses sadness, singing helps people release their emotions and feel better.

× Yes of course I like singing because singing helps me to ex express my emotion and sometimes help me to cry to get get the emotion out to to be more comfortable.

✓ Yes, of course, I like singing because singing helps me to express my emotions and sometimes helps me to cry to get the emotions out and to be more comfortable.

The verb 'express' was incorrectly written as 'ex express' and 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. Repetition of words like 'get get' and 'to to' are errors and should be corrected. The sentence structure is improved by adding conjunctions for clarity.

× Uh, sorry but I haven't learned how to sing. My parents can't afford afford to me to go study.

✓ Uh, sorry, but I haven't learned how to sing. My parents can't afford to send me to study.

The phrase 'afford afford to me to go study' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'afford to send me to study' or 'afford for me to go study'. The repetition 'afford afford' is a mistake. The verb 'send' is necessary to complete the meaning.

× It's uh, of course, definitely my, my crush, my girlfriend, uh, and it can be my, my, my best friend because I, I, I don't beside when I sing for them because they know exactly who I am.

✓ It's, uh, of course, definitely my crush, my girlfriend, uh, and it can be my best friend because I don't mind singing for them since they know exactly who I am.

The phrase 'I don't beside' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't mind'. Also, unnecessary repetition of 'my' and 'I' should be avoided. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Of course, but sometime is bring the the sadness, but they bring the sadness to bring happiness to people because when we are bored or sad, singing and music bring the Sandy to me to Expo to expose of every.

✓ Of course, but sometimes it brings sadness, but they bring sadness to bring happiness to people because when we are bored or sad, singing and music bring comfort to me to express every feeling.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (plural adverb). 'Is bring' should be 'it brings' to agree with singular subject. 'The the' is repetition error. 'Sandy' is likely a typo for 'sadness' or 'comfort'. The phrase 'to Expo to expose of every' is unclear and corrected to 'to express every feeling' for meaning and grammar. Plural and singular forms are corrected accordingly.