唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，且表达不完整。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免重复，并且用连贯的句子表达原因。

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because it helps me relieve stress. Also, I feel confident when I sing better than others.

建議: 回答中断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议用完整句子表达，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons. I usually rely on my talent and instinct. For example, I imitate my favorite singer's voice and singing skills to improve.

建議: 回答中断，语法不完整。建议用完整句子表达愿望，并避免口语化的“Ya”。

範例: If I have the chance to marry my girlfriend, I would like to sing a special song for her to express my love.

建議: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，保持句子完整和逻辑清晰。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because skilled singers can express emotions that touch people's hearts. However, if someone sings poorly, it might not have the same effect.

× Yes, I enjoy singing very much because I think singing is a.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing very much because I think singing is good.

句子不完整，缺少谓语或宾语，导致表达不清。应补充完整，使句子结构完整。

× It's a good way to let me. Get released from the pressure.

✓ It's a good way to let me get released from the pressure.

句子被错误地拆分成两部分，导致结构不完整。应合并为一句完整句子。

× Another reason is that many people, Another reason is that.

✓ Another reason is that many people...

句子重复且不完整，缺少后续内容，导致表达混乱。应删除重复部分并补充完整。

× I can sing better than the other people.

✓ I can sing better than other people.

“the other people”在此处不合适，通常比较时用“other people”表示其他人。

× No. I usually sing by my. Talent and instinct.

✓ No. I usually sing by my talent and instinct.

句子被错误拆分，应合并。此处“by my talent and instinct”表达方式正确，无需改动。

× For example. I like a singer, so I will imitate his voice and his sing skills.

✓ For example, I like a singer, so I will imitate his voice and his singing skills.

句子被错误拆分，应合并为一句完整句子；“sing skills”应改为“singing skills”，因为“sing”是动词，需用动名词形式作名词。

× And then I will output, yeah.

✓ And then I will perform, yeah.

“output”用法不当，表达不清，应使用更合适的动词如“perform”表示表演。

× If I could have the chance to. Get married with my. Girlfriend, I think I will sing a special song for her.

✓ If I could have the chance to get married to my girlfriend, I think I will sing a special song for her.

“get married with”应改为“get married to”，表示与某人结婚；句子不应被拆分。

× No, I think it's up to the same skills for different people.

✓ No, I think it depends on the same skills for different people.

“it's up to”用法错误，应使用“it depends on”表示“取决于”。

× Many people are good at seeing so they can bring many emotions to people that people enjoy the.

✓ Many people are good at singing so they can bring many emotions to people that people enjoy.

“seeing”应为“singing”，拼写错误导致词义错误。

× Separate feelings.

✓ Different feelings.

“Separate feelings”表达不自然，应改为“different feelings”表示不同的感受。

× But if one person doesn't wear in singing, I think it will be a disaster for everyone.

✓ But if one person isn't good at singing, I think it will be a disaster for everyone.

“doesn't wear in singing”表达错误，应改为“isn't good at singing”表示不擅长唱歌。