唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I do like singing. I think it is my calling and also my father likes to sing as well. So I started singing from such a young age and I really enjoy it.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
I've never got any formal training for singing, but I've been studying choir since elementary to high school and then in church as well.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
There's no specific audience that I want to sing for, I just really like to sing for myself because it helps me relax, it helps me unwind. It also really fun and enjoyable activities for my day-to-day work.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
For certain people yes, and for some of the others no. It depends on the audience and their interest in art, especially in this case music. I I think if you really like singing you can really get enjoyment from it.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 75.0建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I do like singing' and 'I really enjoy it' without adding new information. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it runs in my family; my father also loves it. I started singing at a young age, and it has always been a source of joy for me.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 80.0建議: Your answer is relevant and informative, but the sentence structure could be improved for naturalness. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing like 'I've never got'.
範例: Although I haven't had formal singing lessons, I have been part of choirs from elementary school through high school, and I also sing in my church choir.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 70.0建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar mistakes such as 'It also really fun' to 'It is also a really fun'. Keep sentences concise and clear.
範例: I don't have a particular audience in mind; I sing mainly for myself because it helps me relax and unwind. Additionally, it's a fun activity that brightens my daily routine.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 65.0建議: Your answer is a bit hesitant and contains repetition ('I I think'). Try to express your opinion more confidently and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some of the others no' and be more specific.
範例: I believe singing can bring happiness to many people, although it depends on their interest in music. For those who enjoy singing, it can be a great source of enjoyment and relaxation.
文法
× It also really fun and enjoyable activities for my day-to-day work.
✓ It is also a really fun and enjoyable activity for my day-to-day work.
The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and predicate, and 'activities' should be singular 'activity' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'really' modifies 'fun' and 'enjoyable' correctly, but the sentence structure was incomplete. Adding 'is' and changing 'activities' to 'activity' corrects the sentence.
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