唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时句子较长且有重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且更直接回答问题。

範例: I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. Instead, I prefer dancing and have been learning it since primary school.

建議: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且部分表达重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复。

範例: No, I haven't practiced singing much. I only sang during music classes in school because I'm not confident about my voice. However, I enjoy listening to music in my free time.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，注意语法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I'm not a big fan of singing, so I usually don't sing for others. But I do sing 'Happy Birthday' at my friends' birthday parties.

建議: 回答较好，但表达可以更自然，避免重复“people”。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词。

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing and music can bring joy to both the performers and the listeners. People who enjoy singing or listening to music often feel happier because of it.

× Actually, I do not like singing very much because I am not good at singing but instead I prefer dancing and I have been learning dancing since I was in the primary school and I Can't Sing very well.

✓ Actually, I do not like singing very much because I am not good at singing, but instead I prefer dancing and I have been learning to dance since I was in primary school and I can't sing very well.

动词后面接动名词或不定式要根据习惯用法选择。这里“learning dancing”应改为“learning to dance”，因为“learn to do something”是固定搭配。

× Actually, I do not like singing very much because I am not good at singing but instead I prefer dancing and I have been learning dancing since I was in the primary school and I Can't Sing very well.

✓ Actually, I do not like singing very much because I am not good at singing, but instead I prefer dancing and I have been learning to dance since I was in primary school and I can't sing very well.

“in the primary school”中的“the”不需要，因为这里指的是一般的学校阶段，应该用“in primary school”。

× No, I haven't really practiced singing before and I don't really like singing.

✓ No, I haven't really practiced singing before and I don't really like singing.

此句无明显语法错误，符合习惯用法。

× The only time I sang was during the music classes in my primary and middle school, but I don't really sing it in my free time because I'm not very confident about my voice.

✓ The only time I sang was during the music classes in my primary and middle school, but I don't really sing in my free time because I'm not very confident about my voice.

“sing it”中的“it”多余，应去掉。

× I'm not a big fan of singing so basically I will not let anyone hear my voice of singing but I will only sing on there on my friend's birthday party and I will sing happy birthday songs for them.

✓ I'm not a big fan of singing, so basically I will not let anyone hear my singing voice, but I will only sing at my friend's birthday party and I will sing happy birthday songs for them.

“voice of singing”应改为“singing voice”，更自然；“sing on there on my friend's birthday party”中“on there on”错误，应改为“at”。

× I'm not a big fan of singing so basically I will not let anyone hear my voice of singing but I will only sing on there on my friend's birthday party and I will sing happy birthday songs for them.

✓ I'm not a big fan of singing, so basically I will not let anyone hear my singing voice, but I will only sing at my friend's birthday party and I will sing happy birthday songs for them.

“them”指代不明确，应该指“my friends”，但句中已明确是朋友的生日派对，使用“them”可以接受。

× So I believe that the people who love singing or the people likes to listen to music are all happy about this.

✓ So I believe that the people who love singing or the people who like to listen to music are all happy about this.

“people likes”中“people”是复数，动词应用复数形式“like”。