唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết, làm cho câu trả lời thiếu tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions through melodies. Singing allows me to share my feelings in a creative way.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và có liên kết rõ ràng giữa các ý để tăng tính mạch lạc.

範例: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often sing in my free time because it's my hobby and helps me relax.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: I would like to sing for my loved ones because singing is a sweet and romantic way to express my feelings to them.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu trả lời để ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể sẽ giúp câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and improve their mood. For example, many studies show that music therapy can reduce stress and increase well-being.

× I had, I had a great passion for singing, uh, 'cause I think it's really stress, stress relieving and it's a kind, uh, it's one of the way to express my own emotion through melody songs and through it's, I think to me, it'll kind of method to express my own feelings.

✓ I have, I have a great passion for singing, uh, 'cause I think it's really stress relieving and it's a kind, uh, it's one of the ways to express my own emotions through melodic songs and through it, I think to me, it's a kind of method to express my own feelings.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'had' when the present perfect 'have' is appropriate to express a current and ongoing passion. Also, 'one of the way' should be 'one of the ways' to match plural form. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to refer to multiple feelings. 'Through it's' is incorrect; it should be 'through it'. Using present tense and correct plural forms improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I had never properly go to a class in order to learn how to sing but well I in my free time I spend time singing a lot 'cause it's my hobby though and I think it's really stress relieving to me.

✓ I have never properly gone to a class in order to learn how to sing but well, in my free time I spend time singing a lot 'cause it's my hobby though and I think it's really stress relieving to me.

The phrase 'had never properly go' is incorrect; the present perfect 'have never properly gone' is needed to indicate an experience up to now. 'Go' should be in past participle form 'gone' after 'have never'. This correction aligns the tense with the context of the question about past experiences.

× The person I really want to sing for is my lovers 'cause I think it's nothing is sweeter than expressing your own thoughts, expressing your own feelings toward the people that you love, especially in a very romantic way in in this case, singing and.

✓ The person I really want to sing for is my lover 'cause I think there is nothing sweeter than expressing your own thoughts, expressing your own feelings toward the people that you love, especially in a very romantic way in this case, singing.

'Lovers' is plural but 'the person' is singular, so 'lover' should be singular to match. Also, 'it's nothing is sweeter' is incorrect; it should be 'there is nothing sweeter' to express the idea properly. The sentence was also cleaned up for clarity and grammar.

× Obviously, yeah, most of the time I think singing is a kind of way to to just calm people down and get in into the mood and change their change their frequency and make them feel better right away. And it's been scientifically proven that singing or especially music took part in.

✓ Obviously, yeah, most of the time I think singing is a kind of way to just calm people down and get into the mood and change their frequency and make them feel better right away. And it's been scientifically proven that singing, especially music, takes part in this.

The phrase 'get in into the mood' is incorrect; it should be 'get into the mood' as 'into' is the correct preposition here. Also, 'change their change their frequency' is repetitive and should be 'change their frequency'. The last sentence was incomplete and corrected to 'takes part in this' to complete the thought. These corrections improve prepositional use and sentence clarity.