唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use the present tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, make your answer more natural by saying why you like singing or listening to music, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. However, my voice isn't very good, so I prefer listening to music instead.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you learnt. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by watching YouTube videos. I focused on techniques like how to sing properly and how to improve my vocal range.

建議: Try to use more natural expressions and correct tense. Also, explain your feelings clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: As I mentioned earlier, my voice isn't very good, so I usually sing just for myself. I'm quite shy about singing in front of others.

建議: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about how singing brings happiness and avoid awkward phrasing.

範例: I believe skilled singers can express emotions that help people feel empathy and comfort, which in turn brings happiness to listeners.

× Yes, I really liked singing.

✓ Yes, I really like singing.

The question is in the present tense asking about a current preference, so the verb should also be in the present tense 'like' instead of past tense 'liked'.

× I would prefer to listen music.

✓ I would prefer to listen to music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect in English.

× Yes, since I think I have been a wild I have I've got to search up on YouTube videos and look at how how to sync and how to open your voice.

✓ Yes, I think I have been wild. I have searched YouTube videos to learn how to sing and how to open my voice.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Since' is incorrectly used, and 'search up on' is incorrect. Also, 'sync' should be 'sing', and 'your voice' should be 'my voice' to match the speaker. The sentence is split for clarity and correct tense usage.

× how how to sync and how to open your voice.

✓ how to sing and how to open my voice.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own voice, so 'my' should be used. Also, 'sync' is a typo and should be 'sing'.

× I will sing just for myself and I was quite timid to show you to others.

✓ I will sing just for myself because I am quite timid to show it to others.

The sentence mixes future and past tense incorrectly. 'Was' should be 'am' to express current timidity. Also, 'show you to others' is incorrect; it should be 'show it to others' referring to the voice.

× I think the singers that with technical skills and they can makes people to empathy, show empathy and also comfort to others and that will bring us happiness.

✓ I think singers with technical skills can make people feel empathy, show empathy, and also comfort others, and that will bring us happiness.

The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'singers'. 'Can makes' is incorrect. Also, 'people to empathy' is incorrect; it should be 'make people feel empathy'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.