唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use more natural expressions and correct vocabulary. For example, instead of "put airports in my ears," say "put on headphones." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and clear.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing. Whenever I feel stressed from work, I put on my headphones and sing loudly by myself in my room to relax.

建議: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct verb tenses and grammar to express your ideas.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I haven't been very interested in learning to sing. I usually spend my time on other hobbies.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like "write with emotions with 1/2 in my heart." Be specific and concise.

範例: I usually like to sing for my parents on their anniversary. Sometimes, when I feel emotional, I sing special songs for them to express my feelings.

建議: Try to organize your answer with linking words and correct grammar. Use specific examples and avoid awkward phrases like "bring happiness in our face" or "we get started."

範例: Yes, I believe singing different types of songs can make people happy. For example, singing in a group is beautiful and helps us feel calm, peaceful, and relaxed after a busy day.

× When I was frustrated from my any kind of work at that time, I just put airports in my ears and sing loudly and alone in my room.

✓ When I was frustrated from any kind of work at that time, I just put earphones in my ears and sang loudly and alone in my room.

The verb 'sing' should be in the past tense 'sang' to match the past tense context established by 'was frustrated'. Also, 'airports' is incorrect; the correct word is 'earphones'.

× Honestly speaking, I never know how to sing because I don't have that much interest in thinking because I mostly do uh, other activities in my life.

✓ Honestly speaking, I never knew how to sing because I don't have that much interest in it since I mostly do other activities in my life.

The verb 'know' should be in the past tense 'knew' to match the context of 'never' referring to past experience. Also, 'interest in thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'interest in it' referring to singing.

× When I was frustrated from my any kind of work at that time, I just put airports in my ears and sing loudly and alone in my room.

✓ When I was frustrated with any kind of work at that time, I just put earphones in my ears and sang loudly and alone in my room.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect after 'frustrated'; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'my any kind of work' is incorrect; it should be 'any kind of work'.

× Yes definitely when we sing a different type of songs it bring happiness in our face and we get started even singing in a groups which is very look beautiful and we feel very calm and peaceful and feel very relaxed from our hectic schedule.

✓ Yes, definitely, when we sing different types of songs, it brings happiness to our faces and we even start singing in groups which look very beautiful, and we feel very calm, peaceful, and relaxed from our hectic schedule.

The phrase 'a different type of songs' is incorrect; it should be 'different types of songs' to match plural. The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'In our face' should be 'to our faces'. 'A groups' should be 'groups'. 'Is very look beautiful' is incorrect; it should be 'look very beautiful'.

× Yes definitely when we sing a different type of songs it bring happiness in our face and we get started even singing in a groups which is very look beautiful and we feel very calm and peaceful and feel very relaxed from our hectic schedule.

✓ Yes, definitely, when we sing different types of songs, it brings happiness to our faces and we even start singing in groups which look very beautiful, and we feel very calm, peaceful, and relaxed from our hectic schedule.

The phrase 'get started even singing' is awkward; it should be 'even start singing' to correctly use the verb + -ing form after 'start'. Also, 'which is very look beautiful' is incorrect; 'look' is the correct verb form here.

× Well, I mostly like to sing for my father and mother on their anniversary and sometime when I have an emotional feeling for them, then I would like to sing for them a special song.

✓ Well, I mostly like to sing for my father and mother on their anniversary and sometimes when I have an emotional feeling for them, I would like to sing a special song for them.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the phrase 'sing for them a special song' is awkward; the correct order is 'sing a special song for them'.