唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. Avoid redundancy such as "often" twice and unclear expressions like "multiple singing." Try to be more concise and use natural English expressions. Also, limit your answer to about 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I'm in a good mood or hear a familiar song. For instance, on beautiful days while walking outside, I often find myself singing along happily. Singing helps me feel relaxed and cheerful.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "member in the court" and "lessons were really professionals." Try to use correct expressions and clearer sentences. Also, add linking words to improve coherence and provide more specific details about your learning experience.

範例: Yes, I have. I used to be a member of the choir at my local church, where we had singing sessions every weekend. Although the lessons were not professional, the instructors helped us follow the melody accurately and improve our singing skills.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors, such as "my families" instead of "my family." Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, keep sentences concise and natural.

範例: I'm not very good at singing, so I prefer to sing in front of my family and close friends when we go to karaoke. I feel more confident with them because the atmosphere is relaxed and fun, which makes the experience enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant with good supporting details and examples. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "bring happiness" and "raise happiness."

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring joy to many people, especially music lovers like myself. For instance, when I'm feeling down or stressed, I listen to songs that suit my mood, which helps me feel better and relax. Therefore, singing is an effective way to boost happiness and relieve stress.

× Sometimes when I'm on the road, it's a beautiful day. It will make me have a multiple singing.

✓ Sometimes when I'm on the road, and it's a beautiful day, it makes me sing a lot.

The phrase 'It will make me have a multiple singing' is grammatically incorrect and awkward. The verb 'make' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'have'. Also, 'multiple singing' is not a correct expression. The corrected sentence uses 'makes me sing a lot' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× I used to be a member in the court at my local church where we had singing sessions every weekend.

✓ I used to be a member of the choir at my local church where we had singing sessions every weekend.

The phrase 'member in the court' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'member of'. Also, 'court' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'choir', which fits the context of singing sessions. Therefore, 'member of the choir' is the correct expression.

× I don't think this the lessons were really professionals, but the instructors really have to follow the melody accurately and improve our singing skills.

✓ I don't think the lessons were really professional, but the instructors really had to follow the melody accurately and improve our singing skills.

The phrase 'this the lessons' is incorrect; 'the lessons' is sufficient. Also, 'professionals' is a noun, but the adjective 'professional' is needed to describe 'lessons'. Additionally, 'have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to match the past context. The corrected sentence reflects these changes.

× I'm not really good at singing, so I prefer to sing in front of my families and my close friends when we go to karaoke.

✓ I'm not really good at singing, so I prefer to sing in front of my family and my close friends when we go to karaoke.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple family units. The correct singular collective noun is 'family' when referring to one's own relatives. Therefore, 'my family' is the correct usage.