唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如"seeing"应为"singing"，"feel it embarrassed"应为"feel embarrassed"。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性，同时回答可以更简洁自然，避免重复。

範例: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. I feel embarrassed when I have to sing in front of many people, so I usually avoid it.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并说明原因。

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I think it's not necessary for everyone. Also, my heavy schoolwork leaves me little time to practice singing.

建議: 回答不够明确，句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子，并说明理由。

範例: I don't have a specific person I want to sing for because I prefer other ways to express my feelings instead of singing.

建議: 回答中表达有些冗长且不够连贯，建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness to people in different ways. For me, it helps me relax and share my happiness with others.

× Umm, actually I don't like seeing very much because I'm not good at it.

✓ Umm, actually I don't like singing very much because I'm not good at it.

这里的动词应该是表示喜欢的活动，'singing'（唱歌）是正确的动名词形式，'seeing'（看见）与语境不符。动词+ing形式用来表示喜欢或不喜欢的活动。

× I feel it embarrassed when I have to sing in front of many people, so I usually try my best to avoid it.

✓ I feel embarrassed when I have to sing in front of many people, so I usually try my best to avoid it.

'feel'后面直接接形容词' embarrassed'，不需要加代词'it'。错误地使用了代词，导致句子不通顺。

× Actually, I don't spend a lot of time on learning singing because I don't think it's necessary for everyone to think well.

✓ Actually, I don't spend a lot of time learning to sing because I don't think it's necessary for everyone to do so.

'spend time'后面直接接动名词'learning'，'learning singing'不自然，应改为'learning to sing'。另外，'think well'表达不清，应改为'do so'指代前文内容。

× And because of my heavy schoolwork, I didn't spend a lot of time on it and I have limited time.

✓ And because of my heavy schoolwork, I didn't spend a lot of time on it and I had limited time.

前半句用过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，'have'应改为过去时'had'。

× Actually I don't know because I think same for others like me is more or there is more ways to express my feelings not singing.

✓ Actually, I don't know because I think it's the same for others like me, or there are more ways to express my feelings than singing.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'same'前应加'it's the'，'there is'应改为复数形式'there are'，'not singing'应改为比较结构'than singing'。

× I think it depends on seeing comprehensive happiness to everyone, but As for me, it can bring me some ways to relax or some ways to share my happiness to others.

✓ I think it depends on seeing comprehensive happiness for everyone, but as for me, singing can bring me some ways to relax or some ways to share my happiness with others.

'depends on seeing comprehensive happiness to everyone'中' to'应改为'for'，'it'指代不明，应明确为'singing'，'share my happiness to others'应改为'share my happiness with others'。

× So I think I can bring happiness to me.

✓ So I think it can bring happiness to me.

主语应为前文提到的'singing'，用'it'指代，'I'作为主语不合适。