唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally. For example, directly say you like singing but you are not very good at it, and explain why you enjoy it.

範例: Yes, I like singing, although I am not very good at it. Whenever I listen to music, I often sing along quietly in my mind because it makes me feel happy.

建議: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Give a clear and direct answer first, then add a reason or explanation. Use correct verb tenses and avoid unnecessary words.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing. I don't have any singing teacher, so I usually just sing for fun without formal training.

建議: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentences. Avoid repeating the same idea and try to be more specific about your feelings and reasons.

範例: I enjoy songs by Arijit Singh, and I would like to sing for my sister because I love her very much. She is very cute and precious to me, so singing for her would make me happy.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain how singing helps you in specific situations.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. Whenever I feel nervous or sad, I sing songs, which helps me relax and forget my worries. It always cheers me up and makes me feel better.

× I like singing but I'm not good singer.

✓ I like singing but I'm not a good singer.

The noun 'singer' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× when I when I watch music and when I heard when I listen music and listen song

✓ when I watch music and when I hear or listen to music and songs

The verb 'watch' is not typically used with 'music'; 'listen to' is correct. Also, 'heard' is past tense and inconsistent here; 'hear' is better. 'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context.

× I always sing a song in my in my mind and.

✓ I always sing songs in my mind.

The phrase 'a song' is singular but the context suggests a habitual action, so plural 'songs' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete and redundant words are removed for clarity.

× No I I don't. I have not ever learned Singh.

✓ No, I haven't. I have never learned singing.

The phrase 'I don't' is incomplete; 'I haven't' is correct for past perfect negative. 'Have not ever' is better expressed as 'have never'. 'Singh' is a proper noun and incorrect here; 'singing' is the correct noun form.

× I don't have any teacher for singing so I don't sing a song.

✓ I don't have any teacher for singing, so I don't sing songs.

The phrase 'sing a song' is less natural here; 'sing songs' is more appropriate. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I like Ajit Arijit Singh song Please singer.

✓ I like songs by Arijit Singh, please.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Ajit Arijit Singh' seems to be a confusion of names. 'Please singer' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× And I want to sing for my sister because I love my sister.

✓ I want to sing for my sister because I love her.

Repetition of 'my sister' is unnecessary; using the pronoun 'her' improves sentence flow.

× She's little. She's very cute.

✓ She's little and very cute.

Combining the two sentences improves fluency and avoids redundancy.

× So if I will sing, I will sing for my sister because she's my she's precious for me, Yeah.

✓ So if I sing, I will sing for my sister because she is precious to me.

In conditional sentences, the 'if' clause should use the present tense, not 'will'. Also, 'she's my she's precious' is redundant and incorrect; 'she is precious to me' is correct.

× Yes, obviously when I feel very nervous, when I when I feel very sad, I always sing singing a song and it it helped me to it helped me, it gave me relax and I enjoy song and I all I forget all thing and I enjoyed it.

✓ Yes, obviously when I feel very nervous or sad, I always sing a song and it helps me relax. I enjoy the song and forget all my worries.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and redundancy. 'Sing singing' is incorrect; 'sing a song' is correct. 'Helped me' should be 'helps me' to match present tense. 'Gave me relax' is incorrect; 'helps me relax' is correct. 'I enjoy song' should be 'I enjoy the song'. 'I all I forget all thing' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I forget all my worries'.