唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Whenever I got stress during my works, I used to sing a songs that makes me feel peace and good,' you can say 'Whenever I feel stressed at work, I sing songs because they help me feel peaceful and refreshed.'

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing different kinds of songs because it helps me relax. For instance, whenever I feel stressed at work, I sing songs that make me feel peaceful and refreshed.

建議: Try to avoid repetition and improve grammar, especially verb forms. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'but' to contrast ideas. For example, 'I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I usually sing naturally without worrying about tones or lyrics because I sing for myself.'

範例: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I usually sing naturally. I don't worry much about the tones or lyrics because I sing mainly for my own enjoyment.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, correct grammar mistakes and use more precise vocabulary. For example, 'I love to sing for my wife because she often asks me to sing romantic songs. Although I can't sing well now, if I practice, I could sing for her and create a romantic atmosphere.'

範例: I love to sing for my wife because she often asks me to sing romantic songs. Although I can't sing well yet, if I practice, I believe I can sing for her and create a romantic atmosphere.

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be more specific in your explanation. For example, 'Of course, singing can bring happiness and joy to people's lives. When people feel stressed, listening to or singing songs can help them feel refreshed and relaxed.'

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and joy to people's lives. For example, when people feel stressed, listening to or singing songs helps them feel refreshed and relaxed.

× I love to sing uh different songs uh it uh singing or songs makes me quite refresh.

✓ I love to sing different songs; singing makes me feel quite refreshed.

The verb 'refresh' should be in the past participle form 'refreshed' to correctly describe the feeling. Also, 'singing or songs' is redundant; 'singing' alone is sufficient here.

× Whenever I got stress during my works, I used to sing a songs that makes me feel peace and good.

✓ Whenever I get stressed during my work, I sing songs that make me feel peaceful and good.

'Stress' is uncountable and should be used as 'get stressed'. 'Works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here. 'A songs' is incorrect; 'songs' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'songs'. 'Peace' should be 'peaceful' to describe feeling.

× Actually, I haven't learned any any any way that I can sing the songs, but I usually sings naturally and I didn't concern about the tones or lyrics I usually sings for me.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned any way to sing songs, but I usually sing naturally and don't concern myself about the tones or lyrics; I usually sing for myself.

'Sings' should be 'sing' to agree with 'I'. 'Didn't concern' is incorrect; correct form is 'don't concern myself'. Repetition of 'any' is unnecessary. 'For me' should be 'for myself'.

× Actually, I haven't learned any any any way that I can sing the songs, but I usually sings naturally and I didn't concern about the tones or lyrics I usually sings for me.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned any way to sing songs, but I usually sing naturally and don't concern myself about the tones or lyrics; I usually sing for myself.

The verb 'sings' is incorrectly used with the subject 'I'; it should be 'sing'.

× I love to sing a song for my wife.

✓ I love to sing songs for my wife.

'A song' is singular, but generally singing multiple songs is implied; plural 'songs' fits better here.

× Uh, actually she always demands uh me to sing a romantic song but I couldn't.

✓ Actually, she always asks me to sing a romantic song, but I can't.

'Demands me to sing' is awkward; 'asks me to sing' is better. 'Couldn't' implies past inability; 'can't' is present tense and fits better.

× If I got an opportunity to sing a songs by my exercise or practice, I could sing a song for my wife so that she will feel.

✓ If I get an opportunity to sing songs by practicing, I could sing a song for my wife so that she will feel happy.

'Got' should be 'get' for present/future condition. 'A songs' is incorrect; 'songs' is plural without 'a'. 'By my exercise or practice' is awkward; 'by practicing' is better. Added 'happy' to complete the sentence.

× Of course, singings can bring happiness and joyful in a life.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness and joy in life.

'Singings' is incorrect; 'singing' is uncountable. 'Joyful' is an adjective; 'joy' is the noun needed here. 'A life' should be 'life'.

× Many peoples when they feel a stress in their life by hearing different type of things singing they can feel refreshed.

✓ Many people, when they feel stressed in their lives, can feel refreshed by hearing different types of singing.

'Peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural. 'A stress' should be 'stressed'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'people'. 'Different type of things singing' is awkward; 'different types of singing' is better.