唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
I like singing very much because it can give me a sense of happiness and I can pass on this sense of excitement to my friends or the people around me. For example, when I achieve high marks or I achieve something, I will sing in a happy tune so that it can affect people.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
No, I haven't learned yet because I'm busy studying and completing the tasks at the university, so I just don't have such leisure time to learn singing. Besides, I think singing costs a great money and I don't have that budget.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I want to sing for my friends who always encourages me to sing confidently because I'm such a person that I just always say out of tune. But she never mind that she encourages me a lot so I want to sing for her to show my gratitude and my happiness.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, definitely, because I think everyone's voice is unique and can be infectious. When I'm really happy, I will sing a song in a high tune so that people around me can sense this happiness and they will be happier.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy. For instance, when I achieve good results, I often sing a cheerful song to share my joy with friends.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答内容完整，但表达稍显啰嗦，建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并注意语法错误，如“costs a great money”应为“costs a lot of money”。
範例: No, I haven't learned to sing because I'm busy with university studies and don't have enough free time. Also, singing lessons can be expensive, which I can't afford now.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“I'm such a person that I just always say out of tune”不自然，建议简化句子并使用正确的表达方式。
範例: I want to sing for my friend who always encourages me to sing confidently, even though I often sing out of tune. Singing for her is my way to show gratitude and happiness.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答较好，表达清晰且内容具体，但“can be infectious”用词不够准确，建议使用更贴切的词汇，如“contagious”。
範例: Yes, definitely. Everyone's voice is unique and can be contagious. When I'm happy, I sing in a high pitch to share my joy with those around me.
文法
× I want to sing for my friends who always encourages me to sing confidently because I'm such a person that I just always say out of tune.
✓ I want to sing for my friends who always encourage me to sing confidently because I'm such a person that I just always sing out of tune.
主语friends是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式encourage，而不是encourages。此外，句子中表达“我总是跑调”时，应该用动词短语sing out of tune，而不是say out of tune。
× But she never mind that she encourages me a lot so I want to sing for her to show my gratitude and my happiness.
✓ But she never minds that; she encourages me a lot, so I want to sing for her to show my gratitude and my happiness.
主语she是第三人称单数，谓语动词mind应使用第三人称单数形式minds。句子中缺少分号或逗号分隔两个独立分句，需加以修正。
× Besides, I think singing costs a great money and I don't have that budget.
✓ Besides, I think singing costs a lot of money and I don't have that budget.
money是不可数名词，不能用a great money，应使用a lot of money表示大量的钱。
× I just don't have such leisure time to learn singing.
✓ I just don't have enough leisure time to learn singing.
短语中使用such leisure time不合适，应该用enough leisure time表示足够的空闲时间。
× I will sing in a happy tune so that it can affect people.
✓ I will sing in a happy tune so that it can affect people.
此句语法正确，无需修改。
× When I'm really happy, I will sing a song in a high tune so that people around me can sense this happiness and they will be happier.
✓ When I'm really happy, I will sing a song in a high tune so that people around me can sense this happiness and become happier.
句中they will be happier语法正确，但用become happier更自然，表达变化过程。
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