唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a more detailed and natural answer by explaining your feelings or experiences about singing. Use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, you can say why you feel your voice is not good or how it affects your enjoyment.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I feel my voice is not very pleasant. Moreover, I get nervous when I sing in front of others, so I usually avoid it.

建議: Avoid repeating words like 'actually' and try to structure your answer clearly with linking words. Explain your experience and why singing is difficult for you in more detail.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing with my sister before. However, I still don't enjoy it because singing requires a lot of practice and control, which I find quite challenging.

建議: Expand your answer by explaining why you want to sing for your mother. Use linking words to add more information and make your answer more natural and complete.

範例: I want to sing for my mother because she always supports me. Also, singing for her would be a way to show my appreciation and love.

建議: Avoid using fillers like 'umm' and 'yeah'. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion to make your answer more effective and natural.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and can create a joyful atmosphere during gatherings.

× No, I don't like to sing because my voice is not that good.

✓ No, I don't like singing because my voice is not that good.

In English, after verbs like 'like', the gerund form (-ing) is more commonly used than the infinitive 'to sing'. Using 'like singing' sounds more natural and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I have learned how to sing before with my sister, but I still don't like to sing because actually when I learn how to sing, actually singing is not easy.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing before with my sister, but I still don't like singing because actually when I learned how to sing, singing was not easy.

The sentence mixes present tense 'learn' with past context. Since the action happened in the past, 'learned' (past tense) should be used. Also, 'like to sing' should be 'like singing' for natural usage as explained before. Additionally, 'singing is not easy' should be 'singing was not easy' to maintain past tense consistency.