唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện về ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'us enjoy' và câu bị lặp lại hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind after a stressful day. I often sing with my family and friends when we gather together, which makes the atmosphere more joyful and lively.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như 'uh' hay 'umm'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Hãy nói rõ bạn đã học hát khi nào và tại sao.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing during my art classes in primary and secondary school because it was a compulsory subject.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và câu cuối 'Yes, I think so' không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn muốn hát cho họ.

範例: I want to sing for my family and friends because it helps create a joyful and exciting atmosphere when we gather together.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ 'people' quá nhiều và sửa lỗi như 'to have relaxed' thành 'to relax'. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể.

範例: Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they feel sad or tired, singing helps them relax and unwind after a stressful day.

× Yes, I really like us enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind after a stressful day.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind after a stressful day.

The pronoun 'us' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is to say 'I really enjoy singing' without 'us'. The subject 'I' should be followed directly by the verb 'enjoy'.

× I often think for my family and my friend, especially when we gather together which have which make the atmosphere more joyful and lively.

✓ I often sing for my family and my friends, especially when we gather together, which makes the atmosphere more joyful and lively.

The preposition 'for' is correct with 'sing', but 'think for' is incorrect. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. The relative clause 'which have which make' is incorrect; it should be 'which makes' to agree with the singular noun 'gathering' implied. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I have learned, uh, how to sing when I study art. Primary school and uh, secondary school, umm, yes, I think it's a compulsory.

✓ I learned how to sing when I studied art in primary school and secondary school. Yes, I think it's compulsory.

The past tense 'have learned' is acceptable but inconsistent with 'study' which should be past tense 'studied' to match the time frame. Also, 'it's a compulsory' is incorrect; it should be 'it's compulsory' without 'a' because 'compulsory' is an adjective here.

× I want to sing for my family and my friend because when we gather together, I make the atmosphere more joyful and more exciting.

✓ I want to sing for my family and my friends because when we gather together, I make the atmosphere more joyful and more exciting.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'family' and the context of gathering. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people sad or people are tired, people can sing to have relaxed and unwind to enlight after a stressful day.

✓ Yes, of course. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people are sad or tired, they can sing to relax and unwind after a stressful day.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb form errors. 'People sad' should be 'people are sad'. Repetition of 'people' is unnecessary; 'they' is better. 'Sing to have relaxed and unwind to enlight' is incorrect; it should be 'sing to relax and unwind'. 'Enlight' is not correct here and should be omitted.