唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to form clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid repetition of words like 'also' and ensure your answer directly addresses the question with a clear reason. Use simple linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy. I often sing in my room, and my favourite singer is Yo Yo Honey Singh because his songs are very energetic.

建議: Make sure to answer the question directly and complete your sentences. Use correct verb tenses and avoid incomplete thoughts. Provide specific details about your learning experience if possible.

範例: Yes, I have learnt to sing by watching videos of Yo Yo Honey Singh, who is a very famous singer in Punjab. I try to practice his songs to improve my singing skills.

建議: Answer the question clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words like 'because' properly to explain your reasons. Keep your sentences complete and coherent.

範例: I want to sing for my friend Priya because I enjoy singing for my friends on their birthdays. It makes the celebration more special.

建議: Use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas clearly. Replace incorrect words like 'burning' with appropriate ones like 'bring'. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, soft songs can help people feel relaxed and good. Also, some singers perform very well, which makes the audience happy.

× Well yes, I also singing in old room because I also like to sing and I also like yo-yo Honey Singh and he's my. Favorite singer?

✓ Well yes, I also sing in the old room because I also like to sing and I also like Yo Yo Honey Singh and he's my favorite singer.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used instead of the base form 'sing' after 'I also'. The correct form is 'I also sing'. Also, 'old room' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the room. 'Yo Yo Honey Singh' is a proper noun and should be capitalized properly. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Well I also learn from my adult yo Honey Singh. He is a most of famous singer in Punjab. I also like him and I also.

✓ Well I also learned from my idol Yo Yo Honey Singh. He is one of the most famous singers in Punjab. I also like him.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past action. 'Adult yo Honey Singh' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'idol Yo Yo Honey Singh'. 'A most of famous singer' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'one of the most famous singers'. The incomplete sentence 'I also.' is removed for clarity.

× I also sing for my friend Priya and because I also trying to singing and I I I want to sing for my friend on their birthday.

✓ I also sing for my friend Priya because I am also trying to sing and I want to sing for my friend on their birthday.

The phrase 'trying to singing' is incorrect; after 'trying to' the base verb 'sing' should be used. The repeated 'I I I' is corrected to a single 'I'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, many songs can burning happiness to people like soft songs.

✓ Yes, many songs can bring happiness to people, like soft songs.

The verb 'burning' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'bring'. Also, 'bring happiness to people' is the correct phrase. The sentence is corrected for proper verb usage and clarity.

× It is a very relaxed for people and feel very good and some singers are boys very very well.

✓ It is very relaxing for people and makes them feel very good. Some singers sing very well.

'It is a very relaxed' is incorrect; the adjective 'relaxed' should be 'relaxing' to describe the effect. The phrase 'feel very good' needs a subject 'them' and verb 'makes' to be correct. 'Some singers are boys very very well' is unclear; corrected to 'Some singers sing very well' for clarity and grammatical correctness.