唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'make' thay vì 'makes'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and improve my mood. For instance, after a long day, singing my favorite songs makes me feel happier and more relaxed.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp và cụ thể hơn về việc học hát.

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing a little. Although I haven't taken formal lessons, I enjoy listening to music and trying to follow the melodies.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc tốt hơn và sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy nói rõ bạn muốn hát cho ai và tại sao.

範例: I enjoy singing for my loved ones, such as my family, friends, and especially my mother. Singing for them makes me feel confident and happy.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn cần luyện tập để nói trôi chảy, tránh lặp lại và hoàn thiện ý tưởng. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời logic và đầy đủ hơn.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps relieve stress and improve people's mood. For example, after a tiring day, people often listen to their favorite songs to feel better.

× For example, after a long day, singing my favorite songs always make me feel happier and more peaceful.

✓ For example, after a long day, singing my favorite songs always makes me feel happier and more peaceful.

The subject 'singing my favorite songs' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number.

× I have a learnt how to sing but not but not always.

✓ I have learnt how to sing but not always.

The phrase 'have a learnt' is incorrect; 'have learnt' is the correct present perfect form. Also, the repeated phrase 'but not' should be removed for clarity.

× I just listen to the music and enjoy the melodies and then I think follow the song.

✓ I just listen to the music and enjoy the melodies, and then I try to follow the song.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. Adding 'try to' clarifies the intended meaning, and a comma improves readability.

× I enjoy the song.

✓ I enjoy singing the song.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'singing' specifies the action and improves clarity.

× I enjoy singing and I I enjoy singing for my friends my for people who I love.

✓ I enjoy singing, and I enjoy singing for my friends and for people whom I love.

The sentence has repeated words and missing conjunctions. Adding commas and conjunctions improves flow and clarity. 'Whom' is used correctly as the object of 'love'.

× For example, I can sing a really confident to for my mom, my family, my friends and my my lover.

✓ For example, I can sing really confidently for my mom, my family, my friends, and my lover.

The phrase 'sing a really confident to' is incorrect. 'Confidently' is the correct adverb form to describe how one sings. Also, repeated words and missing commas are corrected.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can can help because singing helps relieve the stress and lift their mood, lift their mood, lift the mood.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can help relieve stress and lift their mood.

The repeated 'can' and repeated phrases are redundant and incorrect. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× For instance, after tiring day, people can people can turn on their favorite song and.

✓ For instance, after a tiring day, people can turn on their favorite song and relax.

The phrase 'after tiring day' is missing the article 'a'. The repeated 'people can' is redundant. The sentence is incomplete and needs a concluding verb like 'relax' to complete the thought.