唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như 'have a specific passionate' thành 'have a specific passion'.

範例: Yes, I love singing because it cheers me up when I'm feeling down. For example, I often sing along to my favorite songs by Billie Eilish, Katy Perry, and Charlie Puth while showering or driving, which makes me feel happier.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đầy đủ và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên nên chú ý dùng thì cho phù hợp (ví dụ 'have learned' nên là 'learned') và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

範例: Yes, I have learnt how to sing since kindergarten, as all children in Vietnam do. I memorized several songs from the elementary music book, which I still remember vividly. Moreover, in my first year of high school, I had the chance to sing in the school orchestra, which was a wonderful experience.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'comfortable to sing' nên là 'comfortable singing' và 'I also like tone deaf' không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Honestly, I prefer to sing for myself because I'm not comfortable singing in front of others. I think my singing skills are quite poor since I don't have a soft voice, can't reach high notes, and I might even be tone deaf.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời tốt với nội dung rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

範例: Yes, I definitely believe singing brings happiness to people. It helps them relax and, on special occasions, listening to others sing can help release negative emotions and lift their spirits.

× I'm not a professional singer or have a specific passionate in music, but singing really cheers me up when I'm upset or sad.

✓ I'm not a professional singer or have a specific passion for music, but singing really cheers me up when I'm upset or sad.

The word 'passionate' is an adjective, but the sentence requires a noun to express the idea of a strong interest or enthusiasm. The correct noun form is 'passion'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'for' when referring to passion about something.

× I'm not a professional singer or have a specific passionate in music, but singing really cheers me up when I'm upset or sad.

✓ I'm not a professional singer or have a specific passion for music, but singing really cheers me up when I'm upset or sad.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect after 'passion'; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate the object of passion.

× Singing while showering or driving is the best.

✓ Singing while showering or driving is the best thing.

The sentence lacks a clear noun after 'the best' to complete the comparison. Adding 'thing' clarifies the meaning and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I'm always singing along to my favorite songs by Billie Eilish, Katy Perry and Charlie Puth.

✓ I'm always singing along to my favorite songs by Billie Eilish, Katy Perry, and Charlie Puth.

A comma is needed before 'and' in a list of three or more items (Oxford comma) to improve clarity.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learned' is the preferred past participle form in American English, while 'learnt' is more common in British English. Depending on the variety of English, 'learned' is generally more accepted in formal contexts.

× All of the kids in Vietnam are taught how to sing since they were in the kindergarten.

✓ All of the kids in Vietnam have been taught how to sing since they were in kindergarten.

The preposition 'since' requires a perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. Also, 'the kindergarten' should be 'kindergarten' without 'the' when referring to the general concept.

× All of the kids in Vietnam are taught how to sing since they were in the kindergarten.

✓ All of the kids in Vietnam have been taught how to sing since they were in kindergarten.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'kindergarten' when speaking generally about the educational stage.

× I have learned by heart some songs in the elementary students music book, which I still vividly remember till now.

✓ I have learned by heart some songs in the elementary students' music book, which I still vividly remember to this day.

The possessive form 'students'' is needed to show that the music book belongs to the students. Also, 'till now' is better expressed as 'to this day' for clarity and correctness.

× In the first year of high school, the music teacher taught me how to sing in orchestra.

✓ In the first year of high school, the music teacher taught me how to sing in an orchestra.

The article 'an' is needed before 'orchestra' because it is a countable noun and this is the first mention.

× Well, personally I don't think that I'm comfortable to sing for other people, so I prefer to sing for myself.

✓ Well, personally I don't think that I'm comfortable singing for other people, so I prefer to sing for myself.

The verb 'comfortable' is followed by a gerund ('singing') rather than an infinitive ('to sing').

× Well, like I think that my singing skill is terrible.

✓ Well, I think that my singing skill is terrible.

The word 'like' is used incorrectly here as a filler and should be omitted for clarity and correctness.

× Well, like I think that my singing skill is terrible.

✓ Well, I think that my singing skills are terrible.

The noun 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because singing involves multiple abilities, and the verb should agree in number ('are').

× I don't have soft voice and I cannot reach the higher tone and I also like tone deaf.

✓ I don't have a soft voice, I cannot reach the higher tones, and I am also tone deaf.

The noun 'voice' requires an article 'a'. 'Higher tone' should be plural 'higher tones' to indicate range. 'Like tone deaf' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I am tone deaf'.