唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answers clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it brings me joy and helps me relax. For example, when I sing my favourite songs, it lifts my mood and makes me feel happy.

建議: Focus on using correct sentence structure and avoid repeating words. Begin with a clear statement, then provide specific details about your experience using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing at school. Our teacher was very skilled and gave us useful lessons, which I really enjoyed.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by avoiding filler words and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with specific details and linking words.

範例: If I get the chance in the future, I would like to sing for my husband because he is very loving. I would choose romantic songs to express my feelings for him.

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating the same ideas. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words.

範例: Yes, I strongly believe that singing brings happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. For instance, singing romantic songs can help people share their feelings with others.

× Yes, I like do thinking because when I am singing songs it gives me a pleasure come to my mind.

✓ Yes, I like thinking because when I am singing songs it gives me pleasure that comes to my mind.

The phrase 'like do thinking' is incorrect because after 'like' we use the verb in the '-ing' form. Also, 'a pleasure come to my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'pleasure that comes to my mind' to properly express the idea.

× So these are two main reasons I like singing and apart from this there are lot of lot of songs which which we are connecting to our my mood so that's why.

✓ So these are two main reasons I like singing and apart from this there are lots of songs which we connect to my mood, so that's why.

The phrase 'lot of lot of songs' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'lots of songs'. Also, 'we are connecting to our my mood' is incorrect; it should be 'we connect to my mood' to maintain subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Yes, I learned how to sing in a school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing at school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at school' is the correct phrase to indicate the place where learning happened. Also, 'learned' is correctly used in past tense.

× We have a teacher she is she is fluent to singing and masters in singing.

✓ We have a teacher who is fluent in singing and has a master's degree in singing.

The sentence lacks a relative pronoun 'who' to connect the clauses. Also, 'fluent to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'fluent in singing'. 'Masters in singing' should be 'has a master's degree in singing' for clarity.

× So *** gives us a lessons how to sing.

✓ So she gives us lessons on how to sing.

The sentence is missing the subject 'she'. Also, 'a lessons' is incorrect; it should be 'lessons' without 'a'. The phrase 'lessons on how to sing' is the correct structure.

× So I really enjoyed that enjoyed that Madam class that.

✓ So I really enjoyed that Madam's class.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. 'Madam class that' is incorrect; it should be 'Madam's class' to show possession.

× If I get a chance in my in future.

✓ If I get a chance in the future.

The phrase 'in my in future' is incorrect; it should be 'in the future'. Also, 'If I get a chance' is correct conditional future tense.

× So I want to sing for my husband because he's so loving to me.

✓ So I want to sing for my husband because he is so loving to me.

Contraction 'he's' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity, 'he is' is better. 'Loving to me' is acceptable but 'loving towards me' or 'loving' alone is more natural.

× So I always found like a a good romantic song sing for my hus my hubby.

✓ So I always find a good romantic song to sing for my husband, my hubby.

The sentence has tense inconsistency; 'found' should be 'find' to match present tense. Also, 'like a a good romantic song sing' is incorrect; it should be 'a good romantic song to sing'. 'Hus' is incomplete; 'husband' is correct.

× So yes I do if I get a chance in future.

✓ So yes, I will if I get a chance in the future.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'will' to indicate future intention. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future'.

× Yes, I strongly believe in that, in that singing brings a very happiness to in people because when they are saying they express their feelings.

✓ Yes, I strongly believe that singing brings great happiness to people because when they are singing, they express their feelings.

'A very happiness' is incorrect; 'great happiness' or just 'happiness' is correct. 'To in people' is incorrect; it should be 'to people'. 'Saying' should be 'singing' to match context.

× So if they are singing a romantic song, they also express their feelings.

✓ So if they are singing a romantic song, they express their feelings.

The sentence is grammatically correct but can be simplified by removing 'also' for clarity and conciseness.