唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，例如“release my dress”应为“release my stress”，“make my mind clever tea”表达不清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel peaceful and relieves my stress. I often sing in the morning to refresh my mind and start the day positively.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have ever learned”应为“have learned”，“wash video in online”表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并简洁明了地回答问题。

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing in my school music class. Besides, I like to watch online videos after school to improve my singing skills.

建議: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“encourage me to smile to the life”应为“encourage me to smile at life”，“feel comfortable and strongly”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达和连贯的句子。

範例: I want to sing for my friends because they always encourage me to stay positive when I feel upset. Singing for them makes me feel comfortable and confident.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“the people singing in the past”表达不清晰，“seeing can bring happiness”应为“singing can bring happiness”。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. I have often seen people sing to relieve their stress and boost their mood, so singing definitely brings joy.

× So I often singing in the morning to make my mind clever tea.

✓ So I often sing in the morning to make my mind clear.

这里的动词应该用原形或第三人称单数形式，因为主语是第一人称单数“I”，而且是一般现在时。'singing'是动名词形式，不符合句子结构。'clever tea'是错误表达，应该是'clear'表示清晰。

× Yes, I have ever learned how to sing in school music class and after school I prefer to wash video in online to learn how to sing.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing in school music class, and after school I prefer to watch videos online to learn how to sing.

'have ever learned'中'eve'r用法不当，正确用法是'have learned'。'wash video'是拼写错误，应为'watch videos'。'in online'应改为'online'。

× I want to sing for my friends because when I feel upset, my friend always encourage me to smile to the life and I feel comfortable and strongly.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because when I feel upset, my friends always encourage me to smile at life and I feel comfortable and strong.

'my friend'应为复数形式'my friends'，与前文一致。'encourage'应加第三人称单数形式'encourages'，但这里主语是复数，故用'encourage'。'smile to the life'应为'smile at life'。'strongly'是副词，需改为形容词'strong'。

× I often see the people singing in the past to express their stress and motivate their emotions, So I think seeing can bring happiness.

✓ I often saw people singing in the past to express their stress and motivate their emotions, so I think singing can bring happiness.

'see'应使用过去时'saw'，因为提到的是过去的事情。'the people'改为'people'更自然。'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讲的是唱歌。句首的'So'不应大写。