唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is one of my favorite activities. It helps me relax after a hectic day and also improves my understanding of music.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. My father taught me, and he was very supportive, which surprised me and encouraged me to improve.

建議: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn muốn hát cho ai, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

範例: Actually, I want to sing for everyone, but especially for my loved ones because I appreciate and care about them deeply.

建議: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc ngữ pháp đúng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I think singing is like medicine; it helps people relieve stress after busy days and gives them energy to continue working.

× And actually singing is my one of my favorite activities and that singing helps me these chairs and improve my knowledge about about music and moreover it helps me unwind after a hectic day.

✓ And actually singing is one of my favorite activities and that singing helps me relax and improve my knowledge about music and moreover it helps me unwind after a hectic day.

The phrase 'my one of my favorite activities' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my favorite activities' because 'one of' already implies possession. 'These chairs' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'relax' fits the context better. Also, 'about about' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'about'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, when I when I was a child, I I was teach how to sing, how to sing my my father and his surprise me in singing.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I was taught how to sing by my father and he surprised me with singing.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past participle form 'taught' after 'was' to form the passive voice. 'His surprise me' is incorrect; it should be 'he surprised me'. Also, 'how to sing my my father' is unclear and likely meant 'by my father'. These corrections fix tense and sentence structure errors.

× Actually, I want to sing, sing for everybody, but especially I I prefer I prefer singing for my loved ones mostly because they are my love lover and I appreciate them.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for everybody, but especially I prefer singing for my loved ones mostly because they are my loved ones and I appreciate them.

The phrase 'they are my love lover' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'they are my loved ones'. Also, repeated words like 'I I prefer I prefer' should be corrected to a single instance. This improves pronoun use and clarity.

× Yes, I think singing as a medical that helps people discharge and online after busy days and moreover it may give people energy to continue work.

✓ Yes, I think singing is a medicine that helps people discharge stress and unwind after busy days and moreover it may give people energy to continue working.

'Singing as a medical' is incorrect; it should be 'singing is a medicine' or 'singing is medicinal'. 'Discharge and online' is unclear; likely intended 'discharge stress and unwind'. 'Continue work' should be 'continue working' to use the gerund form after 'continue'. These corrections fix adjective use and verb forms.