唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并注意语法和句子结构。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and concentrate, especially when I do my homework. Singing along with music makes it easier for me to focus.

建議: 回答中出现了明显的语法错误和用词错误，影响理解。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清楚表达没有正式学过唱歌，只是模仿专业歌手。

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. I usually sing based on my feelings and try to imitate professional singers.

建議: 回答有些混乱，表达不够连贯。建议先明确回答问题，然后用连词连接补充说明，避免重复。

範例: I usually sing for myself to feel happy and relaxed. However, if I had to choose, I would sing for my family, like my parents and brother.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议用连贯的句子表达观点，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

範例: I think singing can bring happiness if you sing well and have good relationships with others. People will enjoy listening to you. But if relationships are bad, even good singing might not be appreciated.

× Yeah, I I do like singing 'cause it makes myself get down while I was on doing homework and for the 1st 10 minutes it's really hard for me to focus and I will play music and sing with music then gradually. At the same time watching my task.

✓ Yeah, I do like singing 'cause it helps me calm down while I am doing homework. For the first 10 minutes, it's really hard for me to focus, so I play music and sing along. Gradually, I can focus on my task at the same time.

错误使用了反身代词“myself”，这里应该用宾格代词“me”。反身代词用于主语和宾语是同一人且强调动作回到自身，而此处表达的是动作对自己的影响，应使用宾格代词。建议区分反身代词和宾格代词的用法。

× No, I never learned how to think. I just thinking according to my own feeling and mimic with the professional singers performance.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing. I just think according to my own feelings and mimic the performances of professional singers.

句中“learned how to think”应为“learned how to sing”，且“thinking”用法错误，应为一般现在时“think”，因为表达习惯和事实。动词时态和词汇选择错误导致句意不清。建议注意动词时态和词汇的准确使用。

× I just thinking according to my own feeling and mimic with the professional singers performance.

✓ I just think according to my own feelings and mimic the performances of professional singers.

“mimic with”用法错误，动词“mimic”后直接跟宾语，不需要介词“with”。此外，“performance”应为复数“performances”，表示多次表演。建议学习动词搭配和复数形式的正确用法。

× But actually there are no special people I really want to sing for.

✓ But actually, there is no special person I really want to sing for.

“people”是复数，但后文“no special people”与“is”搭配不当，且语境中指单一特定对象，应使用单数“person”。主谓一致和单复数选择错误。建议根据语境选择正确的单复数形式。

× I just think for myself to make myself happy, focus and relieve myself if you do want to.

✓ I just think for myself to make myself happy, focused, and relieve myself if I do want to.

句中“focus”应为形容词“focused”以匹配句意，且“if you do want to”应为“if I do want to”，人称代词错误。建议注意人称代词和形容词、副词的正确使用。

× If I do want to find someone, maybe just my family, my my, my brother, my parents.

✓ If I do want to find someone, maybe just my family: my brother and my parents.

句中“my my”重复，应删除多余部分。建议注意口语表达中的重复错误，保持句子简洁。

× Well it depends. Really depends. If you're singing really good and your relationship and your your relationship with other people is really great, then thinking will definitely make people happy.

✓ Well, it depends. Really depends. If you're singing really well and your relationship with other people is really great, then singing will definitely make people happy.

“singing really good”中“good”应为副词“well”修饰动词“singing”。“thinking”应为“singing”，语义错误。重复“your relationship”应删除。建议区分形容词和副词的用法，注意词汇准确性。

× Other people will willing to listen to you.

✓ Other people will be willing to listen to you.

“will willing”结构错误，应为“will be willing”，动词“will”后需加“be”构成形容词短语。建议学习情态动词后接动词形式的规则。

× But if you have a bad relationship with other people even using great, they will not appreciate it.

✓ But if you have a bad relationship with other people, even if you are singing great, they will not appreciate it.

句中“even using great”结构不完整，应为“even if you are singing great”，缺少连词和主谓结构。建议注意复合句中连词和完整句子的使用。