唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use complete sentences and correct verb forms. For example, say "I like singing because it gives me peace of mind, especially when I feel sad."

範例: I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and brings me peace of mind, especially during sad moments.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking ideas smoothly. For example, say "No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. I just sing for fun."

範例: No, I haven't taken any professional singing lessons. I just sing casually for enjoyment.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct prepositions and clearer phrases. For example, say "I sing for myself because it makes me feel comfortable and relaxed."

範例: I usually sing for myself because it helps me feel comfortable and relax my mind.

建議: Your answer is too long and repetitive, and contains grammatical errors. Try to be concise and use linking words to organize your ideas. For example, say "Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and express their feelings."

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their emotions.

× Yes, I like singing because it give me a.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it gives me a.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× I like singing because it gave me a mind piece so that's why I prefer to sing when I feel sad.

✓ I like singing because it gives me peace of mind, so that's why I prefer to sing when I feel sad.

The phrase 'gave me a mind piece' is incorrect. 'Peace of mind' is the correct expression. Also, 'gave' should be 'gives' to maintain present tense consistency with 'I like singing'.

× No, I didn't learn how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

The present perfect tense 'have learned' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now, rather than the simple past 'didn't learn'.

× I'm not like a professional singer.

✓ I'm not a professional singer.

The phrase 'not like a professional singer' is incorrect. The correct form is 'not a professional singer' to express negation of being one.

× I just sing as I can.

✓ I just sing as well as I can.

The phrase 'as I can' is incomplete. The correct expression is 'as well as I can' to indicate ability.

× I do singing for myself, for my comfortable, for my relaxation mind.

✓ I sing for myself, for my comfort, and for my relaxation.

'Do singing' is incorrect; 'sing' is the correct verb. 'Comfortable' is an adjective; the noun 'comfort' should be used. 'Relaxation mind' is incorrect; 'relaxation' alone suffices. Also, 'and' is needed before the last item in the list.

× most of the people when they feel like sad, they prefer to singing so they can get their mind relaxed and they can also like they can express their feelings through the singing singing so they enjoy the singing and get.

✓ Most people, when they feel sad, prefer singing so they can relax their minds and express their feelings through singing, so they enjoy it and feel better.

'Most of the people' should be 'Most people' for general statements. 'Feel like sad' is incorrect; 'feel sad' is correct. 'Prefer to singing' should be 'prefer singing'. The sentence was run-on and unclear; it was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.