唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答内容丰富且表达了多种情绪，但句子结构稍显重复，建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For instance, after a long day, singing my favorite songs helps me reduce stress. Moreover, I often sing when I feel tired or upset, and even when I'm happy, I still like to sing.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议注意时态和句子结构，同时提供更具体的理由和细节。

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. In my opinion, singing well is a natural talent rather than a skill that can be taught. Therefore, I usually practice by myself, but I haven't found any method that really helps me improve.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议直接回答问题并用连词连接理由，表达更连贯。

範例: I usually sing just for myself because it helps me reduce stress. In addition, singing allows me to enjoy the moment without worrying about others.

建議: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误（seeing应为singing），且表达不够准确，建议注意词汇使用并提供更具体的例子。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it allows them to express their feelings. Moreover, singing can also help people release sadness, making it a good way to express emotions.

× No I haven't learn how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing.

这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词是'have/has'，后面应该接动词的过去分词形式。'learn'的过去分词是'learned'，所以应改为'haven't learned'。

× In my opinion singing well is a natural skill, not the things you can learn from.

✓ In my opinion, singing well is a natural skill, not something you can learn.

'the things'与前文的'skill'不匹配，且表达不自然，应使用'something'来指代不可数或抽象的事物。

× So I just practice and I found it nothing help.

✓ So I just practice and I found it doesn't help.

这里前半句是一般现在时，后半句应保持时态一致，且'found'后面接的内容应是现在时态，表示事实。'nothing help'语法错误，应改为'doesn't help'。

× Well, I never thought I want to think for somebody, just for myself, it will be OK.

✓ Well, I never thought I wanted to sing for somebody, just for myself, it would be OK.

'never thought'是过去时，后面从句也应使用过去时态，'want'应改为'wanted'。另外，'think for somebody'表达不正确，应为'sing for somebody'。

× I could reduce my pressure when I sing and I can enjoy the same time.

✓ I can reduce my pressure when I sing and I can enjoy the same time.

前后时态应保持一致，'could'表示过去或假设，句中描述的是现在的情况，应使用一般现在时'can'。

× Yes, I think singing can make people happy. And what's more, I think seeing can bring sadness to people because seeing can express the emotion.

✓ Yes, I think singing can make people happy. And what's more, I think singing can bring sadness to people because singing can express emotions.

原句中'seeing'应为'singing'，是拼写错误，且'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，因为表达的是多种情感。