唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to be more natural and concise, for example, say 'I enjoy singing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed.'

範例: I enjoy singing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed, and it allows me to express my emotions creatively.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Instead of 'watch the songs and the songwriters', you could say 'I watch performances and learn from songwriters.' Also, avoid using 'yes' after a negative answer.

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but I often watch performances and learn from songwriters to improve my skills.

建議: Good answer with relevant details. To improve, use linking words to make it more coherent, for example, 'I want to sing for everyone, especially my family members and relatives, because I like to dedicate songs on their birthdays and anniversaries.'

範例: I want to sing for everyone, especially my family members and relatives, because I enjoy dedicating songs to them on their birthdays and anniversaries.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your idea more clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness because people connect their emotions to the song, which makes them feel happier.'

範例: Yes, singing can definitely bring happiness because when people connect their emotions to a song, it uplifts their mood and makes them feel happier.

× Yes, I like singing because the way I sing is pretty much amazing and the whenever I sing I feel calm and relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because the way I sing is pretty much amazing and whenever I sing I feel calm and relaxed.

The definite article 'the' before 'whenever' is incorrect because 'whenever' is an adverb and does not require an article. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× No, I have never learned how to sing, but yes, I watch the songs and the songwriters.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but yes, I watch songs and songwriters.

The definite article 'the' before 'songs' and 'songwriters' is unnecessary here because the speaker is referring to songs and songwriters in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' corrects the preposition usage.

× I want to sing for everyone, mostly my family members and relatives, and I dedicate a song on their birthdays and anniversary occasions.

✓ I want to sing for everyone, mostly my family members and relatives, and I dedicate a song on their birthdays and anniversaries.

The phrase 'anniversary occasions' is awkward; 'anniversaries' is the correct plural noun. Also, 'on their birthdays and anniversaries' is the correct prepositional phrase. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, definitely it can bring happiness to people but because people whenever seeing try to connect the emotions to a song and when the emotions are connected you always feel happier.

✓ Yes, definitely it can bring happiness to people because whenever people see a song, they try to connect their emotions to it, and when the emotions are connected, you always feel happier.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words, making it confusing. Rearranging the sentence to 'because whenever people see a song, they try to connect their emotions to it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.