唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and natural by avoiding phrases like 'to be very honest' and 'not that much melodious'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't like singing because I feel my voice isn't very melodious, and I lack confidence when I sing, so I usually avoid it.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, such as 'learned' instead of 'learnt' in Indian English.

範例: As I mentioned earlier, I haven't learned to sing because I don't like it, but if I get a chance, I would definitely try and practice singing.

建議: Your answer is a bit vague and could be more specific. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like 'as a person I am'.

範例: I'm not sure who I would sing for in the future, but I would like to sing for someone special, like a close friend or family member, to express my feelings.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'they just make their'.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because many people enjoy singing when they are free or feeling low, as it helps them relax and feel better.

× I feel my voice is not that much melodious

✓ I feel my voice is not very melodious

In English, 'that much' is not commonly used to modify adjectives like 'melodious'. Instead, 'very' is the appropriate quantifier to express degree. So, 'not very melodious' is correct.

× I'm under confident while singing

✓ I'm underconfident while singing

The term 'under confident' is incorrect as 'under' should not be separated from 'confident'. The correct adjective is 'underconfident', written as one word, meaning lacking confidence.

× I haven't learned singing till date

✓ I haven't learned singing till date

The phrase 'till date' is acceptable in Indian English to mean 'until now'. However, in standard English, 'to date' or 'until now' is preferred. Since the instruction is to correct only based on the given grammar problem types, and 'till date' is not listed as an error, no correction is made here.

× I will definitely sing something for someone special

✓ I will definitely sing something for someone special

The sentence is grammatically correct; no pronoun error is present.

× Whenever they are free or they feel under confident, they like to sing and they just make their.

✓ Whenever they are free or feel underconfident, they like to sing and just make themselves happy.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'they just make their', which is incomplete and unclear. The correct sentence completes the thought by adding 'themselves happy'. Also, 'under confident' should be 'underconfident' as one word. Additionally, removing the repeated subject 'they' after 'or' improves sentence flow.