唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

範例: Yes, I like singing because music is an important and joyful part of my life. I often listen to music throughout the day, and whenever I have free time or am doing some work, I enjoy humming my favorite songs.

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: I have never officially learned how to sing. Instead, I taught myself by listening carefully to singers and imitating their songs. I have not attended any music classes or institutions.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by reducing repetition and using linking words to make it more coherent and natural.

範例: I prefer to sing for myself because when I sing well and hit the right notes, I feel happy and proud. However, I feel a bit hesitant to sing in front of others.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to finish your thoughts clearly, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, definitely. I believe singing brings happiness because music plays an important role in people's lives. Those who can sing well often feel joyful and proud of their ability.

× I used to listen music most of the time in a day.

✓ I used to listen to music most of the time in a day.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. So, 'listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× I learned it from the singers which I used to listen from them, how to sing the particular song while listening to that song.

✓ I learned it from the singers whom I used to listen to, how to sing the particular song while listening to that song.

The phrase 'listen from them' is incorrect. The correct preposition with 'listen' is 'to', and 'which' should be 'whom' when referring to people. So, it should be 'singers whom I used to listen to'. This corrects both preposition and relative pronoun usage.

× I learned it from the singers which I used to listen from them, how to sing the particular song while listening to that song.

✓ I learned it from the singers whom I used to listen to, how to sing the particular song while listening to that song.

Using 'which' to refer to people is incorrect; 'whom' is the correct relative pronoun for people in this context. Also, 'from them' is redundant and incorrect after 'listen'.

× Other than that, I have never gone to any classes or joined some institution, musical institution to learn music officially.

✓ Other than that, I have never gone to any classes or joined any musical institution to learn music officially.

The phrase 'some institution, musical institution' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'any musical institution' to correctly express the idea of an unspecified institution. Also, 'joined some institution' is less natural than 'joined any musical institution' in this context.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

In formal English, when the pronoun is the object of a preposition ('for'), 'whom' is correct instead of 'who'. However, in spoken English, 'who' is often used informally.

× Well, I would like to sing for my own self.

✓ Well, I would like to sing for myself.

The phrase 'my own self' is redundant and non-standard. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself'.

× So I would like to sing for my own self and not for others because I feel a little hesitant to sing for others as well.

✓ So I would like to sing for myself and not for others because I feel a little hesitant to sing for others as well.

Same as above, 'my own self' should be replaced with the reflexive pronoun 'myself' for correctness and naturalness.

× You know, anyone who could sing better and who could hit the tone, you could ask him or her that how they feel when they could do that.

✓ You know, anyone who can sing better and who can hit the tone, you could ask him or her how he or she feels when he or she can do that.

The sentence mixes singular and plural pronouns incorrectly. 'Anyone' is singular, so pronouns referring to it should be singular ('he or she', 'feels'). Also, 'could' is past tense or conditional, but here present tense 'can' fits better. The phrase 'ask him or her that how they feel' is incorrect; 'that' should be omitted and pronouns should agree in number.