唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语义不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I have loved singing since I was a child because it allows me to express my true feelings and brings me great joy.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且清晰表达时间和经历。

範例: I took singing lessons for a few days but had to stop due to my schedule. However, I have been singing as a hobby since primary school.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法不准确，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

範例: I want to sing for my mom because singing is a way to express my feelings, and I want to show her my love through song.

建議: 回答中有词汇错误（seeing应为 singing），表达稍显笨拙。建议注意词汇准确性，并用更流畅的句子表达观点。

範例: Of course, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express themselves and lifts their mood, making them feel joyful.

× I like singing very much since I was a child because when I sing to whether other people or myself, I feel I'm expressing my true self and I always feel, uh, a sense of excitement.

✓ I have liked singing very much since I was a child because when I sing to either other people or myself, I feel I'm expressing my true self and I always feel, uh, a sense of excitement.

句中“since I was a child”表示从过去某时开始持续到现在，应该用现在完成时态“have liked”而不是一般现在时“like”。另外，“whether”用错，应改为“either”表示“要么……要么……”。

× I have learned for a few days but finally I quit the class because of the arrangement of time. But I keep saying but I kept singing things since primary school and it has it has been a hobby of my daily life.

✓ I learned for a few days but finally I quit the class because of the arrangement of time. But I have kept singing since primary school and it has been a hobby of my daily life.

“have learned for a few days”时态不准确，应该用一般过去时“learned”，因为动作已结束。句中“keep saying”应为“have kept singing”，表示从过去持续到现在的动作，需用现在完成时。重复“it has”应删除。

× I want to sing to my mom, uh, because I think singing is a kind of way and tool to express your feelings and I want to express my love to my mom through singing this through singing.

✓ I want to sing for my mom, uh, because I think singing is a kind of way and tool to express your feelings and I want to express my love to my mom through singing.

动词“sing”后面搭配介词应为“sing for someone”，表示为某人唱歌，而不是“sing to someone”。句末“this through singing”重复，应删除。

× I want to sing to my mom, uh, because I think singing is a kind of way and tool to express your feelings and I want to express my love to my mom through singing this through singing.

✓ I want to sing for my mom, uh, because I think singing is a kind of way and tool to express one's feelings and I want to express my love to my mom through singing.

句中“your feelings”指代不明确，应该用泛指的“one's feelings”来表达一般意义。

× Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people through expressing their true selves, because seeing can lift our emotions and then stimulate our brains to make us feel happy.

✓ Of course, I think singing can bring happiness to people through expressing their true selves, because singing can lift our emotions and then stimulate our brains to make us feel happy.

句中“seeing”应为“singing”，是拼写错误，导致词义错误。