唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add a specific reason using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

範例: No, I don't enjoy singing because I find it difficult to keep rhythm and I don't think I have a good voice.

建議: Make your response more fluent and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, correct grammar mistakes and be more specific about your experience.

範例: No, I haven't learnt how to sing. When I was a kid, we had music lessons that focused mainly on playing instruments, so I never had the chance to learn singing.

建議: Avoid starting with conjunctions like 'And'. Begin with a clear topic sentence and provide reasons using linking words. Also, correct repetition and grammar errors to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Honestly, I don't want to sing for anyone because I haven't learned how to sing properly, and I think I would perform badly.

建議: Try to organise your ideas more clearly using linking words. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for naturalness. Be more specific about how singing expresses feelings and brings happiness.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. In fact, like other forms of art, singing can connect people and uplift their mood.

× I think I don't have a great voice and it has been always a little bit hard to me to sing and have good rhythm.

✓ I think I don't have a great voice and it has always been a little bit hard for me to sing and have good rhythm.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'hard'. The correct preposition is 'for' when expressing difficulty experienced by someone. The phrase should be 'hard for me to sing' rather than 'hard to me to sing'. This is a common prepositional error.

× when I was a kid we had a music lessons, but uh, this includes how to learn to play instruments.

✓ when I was a kid we had music lessons, but uh, this included how to learn to play instruments.

The phrase 'a music lessons' is incorrect because 'lessons' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. It should be 'music lessons' without 'a'. Also, 'this includes' should be 'this included' to maintain past tense consistency.

× this includes how to learn to play instruments.

✓ this included how to learn to play instruments.

The sentence refers to a past event ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Includes' is present tense; it should be 'included' to match the past context.

× So I couldn't, I haven't had the opportunity to learn how to sing.

✓ So I couldn't; I haven't had the opportunity to learn how to sing.

The sentence is missing proper punctuation to separate two independent clauses. Using a semicolon or period improves clarity. The modal verb 'couldn't' is correct here, but the sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× And honestly, I don't wanna sing for anybody because I've never learned learn how to sing.

✓ And honestly, I don't wanna sing for anybody because I've never learned how to sing.

The phrase 'learned learn' contains a repeated verb. The correct form is 'learned how to sing'. This is a redundancy error rather than a pronoun error, but it affects sentence clarity.

× So that's really amazing about singing and listening to someone how to sing.

✓ So that's really amazing about singing and listening to someone sing.

The phrase 'listening to someone how to sing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'listening to someone sing'. The verb 'sing' follows 'someone' directly without 'how to' in this context.