唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to keep your response concise by avoiding repeated ideas and combining related points more smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress. Since childhood, I've aspired to be a singer, so I practice daily to improve my skills.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your points and provide a clear, complete response.

範例: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I watch tutorials on YouTube to learn. Although I'm not very skilled yet, I enjoy singing because it's fun and relaxing.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by avoiding repetition and adding clearer linking words. Also, try to be more specific about why you want to impress your dad and what kind of music you would sing.

範例: I want to sing for my dad because he loves music, especially female singers. I hope to impress him by hitting high notes and demonstrating the power of my voice.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and unclear in places. Try to organize your thoughts more coherently, use linking words, and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, clarify your points with specific examples or explanations.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness, but it depends on the song's lyrics and melody. When sung with emotion and expression, music can deeply touch people's hearts.

× I practice every day to improve my singing skills.

✓ I practice every day to improve my singing skills.

The sentence is correct in present tense as it describes a habitual action, so no correction is needed.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is commonly 'learned' rather than 'learnt'. Using 'learned' is preferred for consistency and correctness in this context.

× No, actually I don't quite know how to sing.

✓ No, actually I don't quite know how to sing.

The sentence correctly uses present tense to express current knowledge, so no correction is needed.

× I have aspired to be a singer since I was a kid, but I never took singing classes.

✓ I have aspired to be a singer since I was a kid, but I have never taken singing classes.

The phrase 'since I was a kid' requires the present perfect tense 'have never taken' to indicate an action that has not happened up to now, rather than the simple past 'never took'.

× However, I have watched some tutorials on YouTube about it, but I don't think I'm really good at it.

✓ However, I have watched some tutorials on YouTube about it, but I don't think I'm really good at it.

The sentence correctly uses present perfect and present tense to describe past experience and current opinion, so no correction is needed.

× I just sing it.

✓ I just sing.

The verb 'sing' does not require the pronoun 'it' as a direct object in this context. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× I just sing because I think it's fun and I kind of like my.

✓ I just sing because I think it's fun and I kind of like it.

The phrase 'I kind of like my' is incomplete and unclear. Replacing 'my' with 'it' correctly refers to singing and completes the sentence.

× my dad is a big fan of music and women singers

✓ my dad is a big fan of music and women singers

The phrase 'women singers' is acceptable but 'female singers' is more common. However, since 'women singers' is understandable and not grammatically incorrect, no correction is strictly necessary.

× I have always wanted to impress him with singing high notes and showing how powerful my voice can be.

✓ I have always wanted to impress him by singing high notes and showing how powerful my voice can be.

The preposition 'with' is less appropriate here; 'by' better connects the verb 'impress' with the actions 'singing' and 'showing'.

× It can touch your soul, what you sing and how you sing it, the melody, the expressions you make in my in my touch people's hearts.

✓ It can touch your soul—what you sing and how you sing it, the melody, and the expressions you make can touch people's hearts.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('in my in my'). Reorganizing the sentence and removing repetition improves clarity and grammatical correctness.