唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'in sing my singing abilities' và lặp từ 'I will'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident in my singing abilities, and I feel shy when I sing in front of others.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để diễn đạt ý thích nghe nhạc hơn hát.

範例: No, I've never learned how to sing because I prefer listening to music rather than singing, and I lack confidence in my singing skills.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều hoặc số ít khi nói về bạn bè (friends - họ). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: I want to sing for my best friends because I feel comfortable with them, and I don't feel shy when singing for them.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng phần ví dụ chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sửa lỗi và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, liên quan hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel better and relax after a stressful day. For example, many people enjoy singing in the shower as a fun and calming activity.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in sing my singing abilities and I will I will feel shy when I sing in before together.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in singing my singing abilities and I will feel shy when I sing in front of others together.

The phrase 'confident in sing' is incorrect; after 'confident in', the verb should be in the -ing form, so 'singing' is correct. Also, 'in before together' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions; it should be 'in front of others together' to express singing in front of people. The correction improves verb form and preposition usage.

× No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in sing my singing abilities and I will I will feel shy when I sing in before together.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I'm not confident in singing my singing abilities and I will feel shy when I sing in front of others together.

The phrase 'in before together' is incorrect preposition usage. The correct preposition to indicate performing in front of people is 'in front of'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I want to sing for my best friends because I feel comfortable with her. Moreover, I don't feel shy when singing for her.

✓ I want to sing for my best friends because I feel comfortable with them. Moreover, I don't feel shy when singing for them.

The pronoun 'her' is singular, but 'my best friends' is plural. The pronouns should agree in number, so 'them' is the correct plural pronoun to use here.

× For example, many people think in the shower and calm as a fun and exciting activity.

✓ For example, many people think singing in the shower is a fun and exciting activity that helps them feel calm.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'Think in the shower and calm' is confusing. The correction clarifies that people consider singing in the shower as fun and calming, improving sentence clarity and structure.