唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 많으며, 자연스럽지 않은 표현이 있습니다. 간결하고 명확하게 자신의 감정을 표현하고, 문법적으로 올바른 문장을 사용하도록 연습하세요.

範例: No, I don't really like singing because I don't have much skill, and I feel a bit embarrassed when I try to sing.

建議: 답변은 명확하고 간결하지만, 좀 더 자연스럽고 풍부한 표현을 사용하면 좋겠습니다. 간단한 이유나 경험을 덧붙여 답변을 확장해 보세요.

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I sometimes try to sing along with my favorite songs at home.

建議: 답변이 명확하지만, 반복되는 표현을 줄이고 좀 더 자연스럽게 연결어를 사용해 보세요. 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다.

範例: I want to sing for my family, especially my mom, because it makes her happy and shows my appreciation.

建議: 답변이 다소 혼란스럽고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 명확한 이유와 구체적인 예를 들어 자연스럽고 논리적으로 답변하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress and express their emotions through beautiful melodies and meaningful lyrics.

× Not actually, I'm not that.

✓ Not actually, I'm not like that.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'I'm not like that' to indicate a characteristic or preference. 'Like' is necessary to compare or describe similarity.

× I'm not have a big skill about singing well.

✓ I don't have a big skill in singing well.

The phrase 'I'm not have' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I don't have' for negation with 'have'. Also, 'skill about' should be 'skill in' to indicate the area of skill.

× So I think I'm I'm a little embarrassed. Destiny.

✓ So I think I'm a little embarrassed, actually.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an unclear word 'Destiny'. Removing 'Destiny' and correcting the repetition of 'I'm' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing.

✓ No, I haven't learnt how to sing.

Both 'learned' and 'learnt' are past participles of 'learn'. 'Learnt' is more common in British English, but 'learned' is acceptable in American English. Since the rest of the transcript uses British English style, 'learnt' fits better.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by 'to' when indicating the person receiving the singing. 'Sing for' is also acceptable but 'sing to' is more precise when referring to the audience.

× Yeah, singing is 1 one of the way to stress their emotional stress and to perform their info singing skills.

✓ Yeah, singing is one of the ways to relieve emotional stress and to perform their singing skills.

'One of the way' should be 'one of the ways' to match plural form. 'Stress their emotional stress' is redundant and awkward; 'relieve emotional stress' is better. 'Info singing skills' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'singing skills' is appropriate.

× Also it have a very narrative melody and like lyrics.

✓ Also, it has a very narrative melody and lyrics.

'It have' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it has' for third person singular. 'Like lyrics' is awkward; simply 'lyrics' suffices. 'Narrative melody' is acceptable but could be improved stylistically.