唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer shows your interest in singing, but it is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your feelings and reasons. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing.

範例: Yes, I like singing because I find it fascinating. However, I usually sing alone in front of the mirror since I feel a bit shy about singing in front of others.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. Use clearer and more natural language, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I have never taken a formal singing course because I'm a bit shy and afraid to perform in front of others. Instead, I practice singing alone in front of the mirror by repeating parts of songs.

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question about who you want to sing for. Try to answer the question clearly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.

範例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends. Singing in front of the mirror helps me build confidence so that I can perform for them comfortably.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, with good content and vocabulary. To improve, try to use more varied linking words and slightly more natural phrasing to enhance fluency.

範例: I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them forget their problems for a while after a long day. Moreover, it allows them to relax and boosts their energy and confidence.

× I'm interested in singing because I find it as fascinating act, although because of my embarrassing characteristic I think on my own on the mirror usually.

✓ I'm interested in singing because I find it a fascinating act, although because of my embarrassing characteristic I usually think to myself in the mirror.

The phrase 'find it as fascinating act' is incorrect; 'as' should be omitted and 'a' article is needed before 'fascinating act'. Also, 'think on my own on the mirror' is awkward; the correct expression is 'think to myself in the mirror'. The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the verb phrase for clarity.

× I've never taken any formal singing course because I'm a bit shy and I feel scary confront someone else, so I practice singing in front of the mirror by my own by repeating parts of the musics.

✓ I've never taken any formal singing course because I'm a bit shy and I feel scared to confront someone else, so I practice singing in front of the mirror on my own by repeating parts of the music.

The phrase 'feel scary confront someone else' is incorrect; 'scary' is an adjective describing something that causes fear, but here the feeling is 'scared'. Also, 'confront' should be preceded by 'to' as the infinitive form. 'By my own' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on my own'. 'Musics' is uncountable and should be 'music'.

× I often sing in front of the mirror on my own because it helped me to raise my confidence and so I can try singing in front of the others.

✓ I often sing in front of the mirror on my own because it helps me to raise my confidence and so I can try singing in front of others.

The verb tense 'helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action. The phrase 'in front of the others' is incorrect; 'the' is unnecessary here before 'others'.

× I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to forget their problem for a while after a long day and helps them relax and boost their strength and confidence.

✓ I definitely believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to forget their problems for a while after a long day and helps them relax and boost their strength and confidence.

The word 'problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues people may have. Using the plural form is appropriate here.