唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复使用“love”，并且注意语法，如“make a lot of friends”应改为“made a lot of friends”。

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is one of my favorite hobbies. I have been part of my high school choir, where I made many friends and had a great time.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题，例如“learning singing”应为“learning to sing”，“good opportunities”应为“a good opportunity”。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子连贯性。

範例: Yes, I have been learning to sing since elementary school, so I have about 10 years of experience. I also joined my school's choir, which provided a good opportunity to improve my skills and make new friends.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，如“closest people for me to me”和“we see each others always”。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达方式，并增加连贯的连接词。

範例: I haven't thought about this before, but I would like to sing for my parents because they are very close to me and always take good care of me. We often spend time together, so singing for them would be special.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“singings”应为“singing”，“make people more relax”应为“make people more relaxed”。句子结构不够清晰，建议使用更准确的表达，并且逻辑连接词使用更自然。

範例: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness and help people relax. For example, after work, many people go to karaoke to unwind and prepare themselves for the next day.

× I have been participating in high school choir and I love and I make a lot of friends from singing so I love it.

✓ I have been participating in the high school choir and I love it. I have made a lot of friends from singing, so I love it.

The phrase 'high school choir' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific choir. Also, 'make a lot of friends' should be in the present perfect tense 'have made' to indicate the action started in the past and continues to the present.

× I have been participating in Try School choir in our school, which is good opportunities to learn how to sing and as well as make friends over there.

✓ I have been participating in the Try School choir at our school, which is a good opportunity to learn how to sing as well as make friends there.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a location like a school. 'Good opportunities' should be singular 'a good opportunity' to match the singular subject. Also, 'as well as' should not be preceded by 'and'.

× the person I really want to sing for is my parents because my parents are the closest people for me to me and they take care of me all the time and we see each others always.

✓ The people I really want to sing for are my parents because they are the closest people to me, they take care of me all the time, and we always see each other.

'Person' should be plural 'people' to match 'my parents'. 'Closest people for me to me' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'closest people to me'. 'Each others' should be 'each other' as it is reciprocal pronoun and does not take plural form.

× I truly believe that singings can bring happiness and make people more relax.

✓ I truly believe that singing can bring happiness and make people more relaxed.

'Singings' is incorrect; 'singing' is an uncountable noun here. 'More relax' should be 'more relaxed' because 'relaxed' is an adjective describing people.

× After working, most people will choose to go to karaoke because singing as a way to improve, like be ready for the next day and relax themselves.

✓ After working, most people choose to go to karaoke because singing is a way to improve, like being ready for the next day and relaxing themselves.

'Will choose' is acceptable but 'choose' fits better for habitual action. 'Singing as a way' needs the verb 'is' to be correct. 'Like be ready' should be 'like being ready' to use the gerund form after 'like'. 'Relax themselves' should be 'relaxing themselves' to maintain parallel structure.