唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your feelings about singing and listening to music.

範例: I don't enjoy singing because I believe my voice isn't very good. However, I love listening to singers like Adele because their music makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建議: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and lacks fluency. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and provide more specific details about your experience with singing lessons.

範例: When I was six, we learned to sing some national songs at school. However, I didn't enjoy them much, so I didn't practice singing outside of class.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide clear reasons with complete sentences. Avoid repetition and finish your thoughts.

範例: I would like to sing for my favourite singer because his songs help me feel better and connect with my emotions. Listening to his music always cheers me up.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using linking words to explain how singing affects emotions.

範例: I believe singing happy songs can improve people's mood and make them feel better. However, singing sad songs might not always bring happiness, especially if someone is feeling down.

× For me, I'm not into that field 'cause I think my voice is not that good to sing.

✓ For me, I'm not into that field because I think my voice is not good enough to sing.

The phrase 'not that good to sing' is awkward and ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'not good enough to sing' to indicate insufficient ability.

× But I love to listen to many singers like Adele and I love listen to music.

✓ But I love to listen to many singers like Adele and I love listening to music.

After 'love', when followed by another verb, the gerund (-ing form) is used to express enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'love listen' should be 'love listening'.

× It's make me feel.

✓ It makes me feel good.

The sentence lacks a proper verb form and object. 'It's make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It makes'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object or complement.

× When I was 6, they taught us how to sing some songs, some national, national songs.

✓ When I was 6, they taught us how to sing some songs, some national songs.

The repetition of 'national' is unnecessary and awkward. Removing the repeated word improves clarity.

× But I don't like national songs, so I didn't practice.

✓ But I didn't like national songs, so I didn't practice.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was 6'), so the verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'didn't like' to maintain tense consistency.

× I want to thank for many singers, but my favorite is I really love I love his songs 'cause it's make me feel better and has a connection with my emotions.

✓ I want to thank many singers, but my favorite is him. I really love his songs because they make me feel better and connect with my emotions.

The original sentence has pronoun errors and awkward phrasing. 'Thank for many singers' should be 'thank many singers'. 'My favorite is I' is incorrect; it should be 'my favorite is him'. 'It's make' should be 'they make' to agree with plural 'songs'. Also, 'has a connection' should be 'connect' to match the plural subject.

× I love listen to his song when I.

✓ I love listening to his songs when I feel down.

'Love listen' should be 'love listening'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'feel down' completes the thought logically.

× I think he ask because when you sing some song about happiness, you will feel better and some song.

✓ I think he asks because when you sing songs about happiness, you will feel better.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('he ask' should be 'he asks') and incomplete phrases ('and some song' is incomplete and unclear). Removing the incomplete part improves clarity.

× Transfer your remote if you were sad, you can't be happy by singing them.

✓ If you are sad, you can't be happy by singing those songs.

'Transfer your remote' is incorrect and unclear; likely a mishearing or misuse. 'If you were sad' should be 'If you are sad' for general truth. 'Singing them' is vague; 'singing those songs' is clearer.