唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'a joy' nên là 'joy' hoặc 'a lot of joy'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để câu trả lời mượt mà hơn.

範例: Yes, I do. Singing helps me relax and express my emotions. Although I'm not a professional singer, I often sing along to my favorite songs when I'm alone or doing housework. It brings me joy and sometimes even helps me release stress after a long day.

建議: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng câu cuối hơi thiếu cụ thể và có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng từ ngữ chính xác hơn và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I have. In Vietnam, music is a compulsory subject from primary to secondary school, so I learned some basic singing skills during that time. We often practiced folk songs and school anthems. Although I never took professional lessons, those classes helped me develop my singing abilities.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'helps me really stress' nên là 'helps me relieve stress'. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Honestly, I just want to sing for myself. Singing is a way for me to relax and express my emotions, especially when I'm alone. It makes me feel comfortable and helps me relieve stress after a long day. I don't sing to impress others; I just enjoy the moment.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'lead people's mood' nên là 'lift people's mood' và câu cuối bị thiếu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên chú ý dùng từ đúng và hoàn chỉnh câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

範例: Yes, absolutely. Singing can lift people's mood and reduce stress. Whether someone is listening to their favorite song and singing alone, it creates a sense of joy and emotional release. It also helps people connect with others, especially during special occasions or karaoke sessions.

× It brings me a joy and sometimes even helps me release stress after a long day.

✓ It brings me joy and sometimes even helps me release stress after a long day.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the uncountable noun 'joy'. In English, uncountable nouns like 'joy' do not take the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× We often practice folk songs on school anthems.

✓ We often practice folk songs and school anthems.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here. 'Practice' is followed by the objects directly without 'on'. Also, 'folk songs' and 'school anthems' are two separate items, so 'and' is appropriate to connect them.

× It makes me feel comfortable and helps me really stress after a long day.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable and helps me relieve stress after a long day.

The verb 'stress' is incorrectly used as a verb here. The correct expression is 'relieve stress' or 'reduce stress'. Also, 'really stress' is not idiomatic. Using 'relieve stress' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't seem to impress others or just to enjoy the moment.

✓ I don't seem to want to impress others or just enjoy the moment.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper verb usage. Adding 'want to' clarifies the intention. Also, 'just to enjoy' should be 'just enjoy' to maintain parallel structure with 'want to impress'.

× Singing can lead people's mood and reduce stress.

✓ Singing can lift people's mood and reduce stress.

The verb 'lead' is incorrectly used with 'people's mood'. The correct verb is 'lift' or 'improve' to express enhancing mood. 'Lead' does not collocate with 'mood' in this context.

× Whether someone is listening to their favorite song and singing alone, it creates a sense of joy and emotional release.

✓ Whether someone is listening to their favorite song or singing alone, it creates a sense of joy and emotional release.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used here. 'Whether' pairs with 'or' to present alternatives. Using 'or' correctly shows the two separate scenarios.

× It also helps people connect with order, especially during special occasions or in karaoke sessions, which is.

✓ It also helps people connect with others, especially during special occasions or in karaoke sessions.

The word 'order' is a typo or incorrect word choice; the intended word is 'others'. Also, the phrase 'which is' at the end is incomplete and unnecessary, so it is removed for clarity.