唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, definitely I enjoy singing because it helps me to relax and let my hair down. Moreover, it can do wonders for enriching about the knowledge of music world and hanger.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes, I have learned to a thing before and my father has taught me because I am a person who is very busy that my parents.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I would like to sing for my friends because they are very friendly and it helps me to let my hair down after a hard day and moreover, my family is a good choice.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people because it can do wonders for relaxing and letting my hair down after a stressful day. My parents and my friends like to singing.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 60.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, cụm từ "enriching about the knowledge of music world and hanger" không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
範例: Yes, I definitely enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind. Moreover, it broadens my understanding of music and improves my mood.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 40.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp.
範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing before. My father taught me because my parents are very busy.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 65.0建議: Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp lại ý. Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để kết nối các ý và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
範例: I would like to sing for my friends because they are very friendly, and singing helps me relax after a hard day. Also, my family is a good audience for my singing.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 55.0建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "like to singing" nên là "like singing". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên cụ thể hơn và tránh lặp lại ý giống câu trước.
範例: Yes, absolutely. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and relieve stress. For example, my parents and friends enjoy singing together to feel joyful.
文法
× it can do wonders for enriching about the knowledge of music world and hanger
✓ it can do wonders for enriching the knowledge of the music world and hunger
The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used after 'enriching'. The correct phrase is 'enriching the knowledge'. Also, 'hanger' seems to be a typo and should be 'hunger'. Additionally, 'music world' needs the definite article 'the'.
× I have learned to a thing before and my father has taught me because I am a person who is very busy that my parents
✓ I have learned a thing before and my father has taught me because I am a person who is busier than my parents
The phrase 'to a thing' is incorrect; it should be 'a thing'. Also, the comparison 'very busy that my parents' is incorrect; it should be 'busier than my parents' to correctly compare two subjects in the present tense.
× I am a person who is very busy that my parents
✓ I am a person who is busier than my parents
The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used for comparison; 'than' should be used to compare two entities.
× my parents and my friends like to singing
✓ my parents and my friends like singing
The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Therefore, 'like to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing'.
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