唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy like "sing a song" twice and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me feel refreshed and relaxed.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct verb forms and linking words for coherence.

範例: I haven't formally learnt how to sing, but I grew up listening to songs and often memorise and sing them by myself.

建議: Your answer has some confusion and grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use correct pronouns and clarify your ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and add linking words to improve flow.

範例: I like to sing for my mother because she is kind and has helped me many times, so I enjoy surprising her with a song.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words and vary your vocabulary to make your response more engaging.

範例: Absolutely, singing can help people reduce stress and feel refreshed, which brings them happiness.

× Definitely I am quite into it because when I sing a song I feel very fresh and relaxed.

✓ Definitely, I am quite into it because when I sing a song, I feel very fresh and relaxed.

A comma is needed after 'Definitely' as it is an introductory word, and also after 'song' to separate clauses properly, improving sentence clarity and flow.

× Frankly speaking, I grew up to listen to songs.

✓ Frankly speaking, I grew up listening to songs.

The phrase 'grew up to listen' is incorrect. The correct form is 'grew up listening' using the present participle to indicate an ongoing action during childhood.

× I don't learn these songs.

✓ I don't learn these songs.

This sentence is grammatically correct but contextually awkward. However, since it fits the present tense and no grammar problem type applies, no correction is needed.

× My brain catch these songs and I repeatly speak these songs and sing songs.

✓ My brain catches these songs and I repeatedly speak these songs and sing songs.

Subject-verb agreement requires 'catches' for 'brain' (third person singular). Also, 'repeatly' is a misspelling; the correct adverb is 'repeatedly'.

× I like to sing for my mother because my mother is so innocent and she helps me a lot of time.

✓ I like to sing for my mother because she is so innocent and she helps me a lot of times.

Repeating 'my mother' is redundant; using 'she' is more natural. Also, 'a lot of time' should be 'a lot of times' to indicate frequency.

× I surprised him to sing a song.

✓ I surprised her by singing a song.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect as the subject is singing for 'my mother' (female). Also, the verb structure should be 'surprised her by singing' to express the intended meaning.

× Of course, when anyone sing a song, they reduce their stress and they feel very fresh and relaxed.

✓ Of course, when anyone sings a song, they reduce their stress and they feel very fresh and relaxed.

The verb 'sing' must agree with the singular subject 'anyone', so it should be 'sings'.