唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I like singing very much because it makes my heart full of happiness. Through singing, I can express my feeling. I don't have to carry my heavy heart. When I sing, I feel light.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
No, I haven't learned how to sing but I want to if I get a chance to. My friends my some of my friends sing very well and I like them so much while singing. I find it very attractive. It's like a gift from God and I really want to learn singing.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
I want to sing for myself first of all. Secondly, I want to make it romantic. So I want to sing for my partner. I want to impress him by singing. Expressing your feelings through singing is very romantic and I find it very appealing.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, I think swindling can bring happiness to people without any doubt. For me, listening to song cannot lift my mood from zero to 100 level. And I really love listening to songs and I also prefer singing, although I'm not good at singing.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 75.0建議: तपाईंको जवाफ राम्रो छ तर तपाईंले केही वाक्यहरूमा व्याकरण सुधार गर्न सक्नुहुन्छ र केही वाक्यहरूलाई अझ स्पष्ट बनाउन सक्नुहुन्छ। उदाहरणका लागि, 'express my feeling' लाई 'express my feelings' बनाउनुपर्छ र 'carry my heavy heart' लाई 'carry a heavy heart' भन्नु राम्रो हुन्छ। साथै, तपाईंले केही लिंकिंग शब्दहरू प्रयोग गरेर जवाफलाई अझ प्रवाहपूर्ण बनाउन सक्नुहुन्छ।
範例: Yes, I like singing very much because it fills my heart with happiness. Moreover, through singing, I can express my feelings freely. I don't have to carry a heavy heart when I sing, so I feel light and relaxed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 70.0建議: तपाईंको जवाफमा केही वाक्यहरू अस्पष्ट छन् र व्याकरणमा सुधार आवश्यक छ। 'My friends my some of my friends' लाई सुधार गर्नुपर्छ र 'learn singing' लाई 'learn to sing' भन्नु उपयुक्त हुन्छ। साथै, तपाईंले लिंकिंग शब्दहरू प्रयोग गरेर जवाफलाई अझ राम्रो बनाउन सक्नुहुन्छ।
範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I want to if I get a chance. Some of my friends sing very well, and I really admire them. I find singing very attractive; it feels like a gift from God, so I really want to learn to sing.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 80.0建議: तपाईंको जवाफ राम्रो छ तर 'make it romantic' भन्ने वाक्य अस्पष्ट छ। तपाईंले यसलाई स्पष्ट बनाउन सक्नुहुन्छ र केही लिंकिंग शब्दहरू थपेर जवाफलाई अझ प्रवाहपूर्ण बनाउन सक्नुहुन्छ।
範例: I want to sing for myself first of all because it makes me happy. Secondly, I want to sing romantic songs for my partner to impress him. Expressing feelings through singing is very romantic, and I find it very appealing.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 60.0建議: यहाँ 'swindling' शब्द गलत प्रयोग भएको छ, जसले अर्थमा भ्रम पैदा गर्छ। तपाईंले 'singing' भन्नु पर्छ। साथै, 'listening to song' लाई 'listening to songs' बनाउनुपर्छ। तपाईंले वाक्यहरूलाई स्पष्ट र सुसंगत बनाउन लिंकिंग शब्दहरू प्रयोग गर्न सक्नुहुन्छ।
範例: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For me, listening to songs can lift my mood from zero to one hundred. I really love listening to music, and I also enjoy singing, even though I'm not very good at it.
文法
× Through singing, I can express my feeling.
✓ Through singing, I can express my feelings.
The noun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions or sensations that one can express, not just one.
× My friends my some of my friends sing very well and I like them so much while singing.
✓ Some of my friends sing very well and I like them so much while singing.
The phrase 'My friends my some of my friends' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'Some of my friends' to correctly indicate a subset of friends.
× For me, listening to song cannot lift my mood from zero to 100 level.
✓ For me, listening to songs cannot lift my mood from zero to 100 level.
The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to listening to music in general, which involves multiple songs.
× Yes, I think swindling can bring happiness to people without any doubt.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people without any doubt.
The word 'swindling' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context of the conversation about singing.
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