唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and unclear. You first say you do not like singing because you are not good at it, but then you mention singing in the bath to relax. Try to be consistent and clear. Also, avoid repeating the question in your answer. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: I don't particularly enjoy singing because I feel I'm not very good at it. However, I sometimes sing quietly while taking a bath to help me relax and clear my mind.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit confusing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. However, I enjoy listening to songs to relax. In the future, I might try to learn singing if I become interested.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. The question asks 'Who' you want to sing for, but you talk about the type of songs you like. Make sure to answer the question directly with a topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, improve sentence structure and vocabulary.

範例: I would like to sing for my family and friends. Specifically, I enjoy singing folk songs that reflect my culture and traditions because they have special meaning to us.

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Use clearer expressions and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When people sing, it helps them relax and boosts their energy, allowing them to work more sincerely and enthusiastically.

× No, I do not like singing because I am not good in the singing.

✓ No, I do not like singing because I am not good at singing.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' when referring to a skill is 'at', not 'in'. Therefore, 'good in the singing' should be corrected to 'good at singing'.

× I like to listen songs to relax my mind but in future I would try if I want to.

✓ I like to listen to songs to relax my mind but in the future I would try if I want to.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct in this context.

× I like to sing the folk songs that are based on my culture, tradition and some of the things like that are belonging to my.

✓ I like to sing folk songs that are based on my culture, tradition, and some other things that belong to me.

The phrase 'belonging to my' is incorrect; it should be 'belong to me' to use the correct pronoun. Also, 'some of the things like that' is awkward and better expressed as 'some other things'.

× I think singing can bring happiness to the people.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people.

The definite article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here because the statement refers to people in general, not specific people.

× Whenever people like to sing, it can relax their mind as well as boost their energy to do that work with full of sincere.

✓ Whenever people like to sing, it can relax their minds as well as boost their energy to do that work with full sincerity.

The phrase 'with full of sincere' is incorrect; the correct form is 'with full sincerity'. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with 'people'.