唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I like singing a lot because the bathroom's echo makes my voice sound better, which motivates me to sing more."

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing a lot because the bathroom's echo enhances my voice, making me feel more confident and encouraging me to practice regularly.

建議: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and could be clearer with better sentence structure. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and keep sentences concise. For example, "No, I have never learned singing professionally; however, I enjoy singing my favourite songs at parties."

範例: No, I have never taken professional singing lessons; however, I often sing my favourite songs at parties and other occasions for fun.

建議: Good answer with clear content. To improve, combine sentences using linking words like 'and' or 'so' for better flow. Also, add a bit more detail to make it richer. For example, "I want to sing for my girlfriend, family, and relatives because I enjoy dedicating songs to them during special occasions and always try to give my best performance."

範例: I want to sing for my girlfriend, family, and relatives because I enjoy dedicating songs to them during special occasions, and I always try to perform my best to make them happy.

建議: Your answer has good intent but contains some unclear phrases like 'logistic and mental way.' Try to use clearer vocabulary and explain your ideas more precisely. For example, "Yes, definitely. Singing helps people improve their mood and reduce stress because it promotes mental and emotional well-being."

範例: Yes, definitely. Singing helps people improve their mood and reduce stress because it promotes mental and emotional well-being.

× Yes, I like singing a lot, but I usually sing in the bathroom because the sound echoes there and I feel a lot better because my singing still improve in the bathroom.

✓ Yes, I like singing a lot, but I usually sing in the bathroom because the sound echoes there and I feel a lot better because my singing still improves in the bathroom.

The verb 'improve' should be in the third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'my singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to the present tense.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I usually sing the songs that I like and sometimes in the party or any occasion I sing on the mic, but I have never tried to learn it in a professional way.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I usually sing the songs that I like and sometimes at parties or on any occasion I sing on the mic, but I have never tried to learn it in a professional way.

The prepositions 'in the party' and 'in any occasion' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'at parties' and 'on any occasion'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I usually sing the songs that I like and sometimes in the party or any occasion I sing on the mic, but I have never tried to learn it in a professional way.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I usually sing the songs that I like and sometimes at parties or on any occasion I sing on the mic, but I have never tried to learn it in a professional way.

The prepositions 'in the party' and 'in any occasion' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'at parties' and 'on any occasion'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× I want to sing for my girlfriend, my family, my relatives. I dedicate songs to them on any party or occasion and try to sing my best.

✓ I want to sing for my girlfriend, my family, my relatives. I dedicate songs to them at any party or occasion and try to sing my best.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to events like 'party' or 'occasion'. The correct preposition is 'at'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× Singing has always helped people to cope up from their bad moods or any kind of depression or anxiety because singing keeps you healthy in a very logistic and mental way.

✓ Singing has always helped people to cope with their bad moods or any kind of depression or anxiety because singing keeps you healthy in a very logical and mental way.

The phrase 'cope up from' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cope with'. Also, 'logistic' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'logical'. These are incorrect use of prepositions and incorrect use of adjectives issues.