唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating the same words and focus on natural English expressions.

範例: Yes, I like singing because listening to my favorite music makes me feel happy and relaxed. It helps me improve my mood and enjoy my free time.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure.

範例: No, I have never learned how to sing, but in the future, I plan to learn how to play the guitar because I enjoy listening to people play it.

建議: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to give a complete sentence and explain your reason to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: I want to sing for myself because it helps me express my feelings and relax after a long day.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains a mistake ('thinking' instead of 'singing'). Try to give a clear and complete answer with supporting details.

範例: Yes, of course. Singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express emotions and connect with others.

× Yes, I like because when I listen the music which I love, which I love and like, I feel a bit more, better, better.

✓ Yes, I like it because when I listen to the music which I love, I feel a bit better.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object, so 'listen the music' should be 'listen to the music'. Also, the sentence is repetitive and unclear; simplifying improves clarity. The phrase 'I feel a bit more, better, better' is awkward; 'I feel a bit better' is correct and natural.

× No, but in the in the future I plan, I plan, I want to learn the play the guitar because I like when people play the guitar.

✓ No, but in the future I plan to learn to play the guitar because I like when people play the guitar.

The phrase 'learn the play the guitar' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learn to play the guitar'. Also, 'in the in the future' has a repeated article; it should be 'in the future'. The verb 'plan' is followed by an infinitive, so 'plan to learn' is correct.

× For me.

✓ For myself.

The pronoun 'me' is an object pronoun and does not reflect the subject performing an action for their own benefit. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is appropriate here to indicate the action is for the speaker's own benefit.

× Yes, yes, yes, of course thinking can bring happiness for people.

✓ Yes, yes, yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect in this context; the question is about singing. Also, the preposition 'for' should be 'to' when expressing that something brings happiness to people.