唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“my Heart will grow on”应为“My Heart Will Go On”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意动词时态和冠词的使用，避免重复表达，并且尽量使句子简洁流畅。

範例: Yes, I absolutely like singing. I have loved Céline Dion since I was six, especially her song "My Heart Will Go On." Singing makes me feel relaxed and happy.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have learn”应为“have learned”，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议加强时态和句子结构的学习，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明学唱歌带来的好处。

範例: Yes, I have learned how to sing for several years. It has taught me singing techniques and also helped me gain more confidence. Moreover, I feel that my singing skills have improved a lot.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“If I want sing”应为“If I want to sing”，且句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的语法结构，明确表达想为谁唱歌及原因，避免重复和模糊表达。

範例: If I want to sing, I would sing for my close friends because it brings us happiness. They always cheer me up, which makes me feel very joyful.

建議: 回答内容不完整且语法错误严重，表达含糊不清。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

範例: Sure, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I sing for my close friend, it cheers her up and makes both of us feel happier.

× Yes, I have learn how to sing for several years.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing for several years.

这里使用现在完成时，动词应使用过去分词形式，'learn'的过去分词是'learned'。

× It's not only teach me the technique about singing, but also teach makes me feel more and more confidence.

✓ It not only teaches me the technique of singing, but also makes me feel more and more confident.

主语是单数第三人称'It'，动词应加's'，且'confidence'是名词，需用形容词'confident'来修饰感受。

× It makes me feel more and more improved group and stronger about singing.

✓ It makes me feel more and more improved and stronger in singing.

原句结构混乱，'improved group'不合适，应表达自己变得更好更强，使用'adjective and adjective'结构，且介词用'in singing'。

× If I want sing, I would sing for my close friend because it can bring us happiness and he always cheers us with me and makes me feel more and more happy.

✓ If I want to sing, I would sing for my close friends because it can bring us happiness and they always cheer me up and make me feel happier and happier.

'want'后应接不定式'to sing'；'close friend'应为复数；'cheers us with me'表达错误，改为'they always cheer me up'；'makes me feel more and more happy'改为'make me feel happier and happier'。

× Sure, for example if I would see from my close friend because it would bring her ******* and she always cheer me up a few people more and more happy.

✓ Sure, for example, if I see my close friend, it would bring her happiness and she always cheers me up and makes a few people happier and happier.

'would see'改为一般现在时'see'；'cheer'应加's'；'more and more happy'改为比较级'happier and happier'；句子结构需调整使表达清晰。