唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“saying”应为“singing”，“get out of buttons”表达不清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

範例: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions when I feel stressed.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm not be trained”应为“I haven't been trained”。建议简洁明了地表达，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

範例: Although I love singing, I have never received professional training, only some basic lessons during primary school.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题，如“same skills”应为“singing skills”，“make them feel funny”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

範例: I like to sing for my family and close friends because even though my singing skills are not perfect, I enjoy making them happy and entertained.

建議: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，如“nothing can bring happiness to people”与后文矛盾。建议明确表达观点，使用连贯的句子。

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and relieve stress.

× Of course I love saying and I think singing loudly is a perfect way for me to release myself and get out of buttons in life.

✓ Of course I love singing and I think singing loudly is a perfect way for me to release myself and get out of burdens in life.

这里'saying'是错误的动名词形式，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。'saying'意为说话，不符合语境。建议用'singing'替换。

× Unfortunately though I I love singing but I'm not be trained professionally, just some compulsory lessons in my primary school.

✓ Unfortunately, though I love singing, I have not been trained professionally, just some compulsory lessons in my primary school.

句中'I'm not be trained'结构错误，应该用现在完成时的被动语态'have not been trained'，表示至今未接受专业训练。

× I prefer to sing for my dear families or close friends.

✓ I prefer to sing for my dear family or close friends.

'families'复数形式不符合语境，通常指多个家庭，应该用单数'family'表示自己的家人。

× I think though my same skills is not very good, but I think so my performance, performance which can make them feel funny or amuse them.

✓ I think though my singing skills are not very good, I believe my performance can make them feel happy or amuse them.

'skills'为复数，谓语动词应使用'are'而非'is'。另外，'funny'用法不当，应改为'happy'或'amuse'。

× I think though my same skills is not very good, but I think so my performance, performance which can make them feel funny or amuse them.

✓ I think although my singing skills are not very good, I believe my performance can make them feel happy or amuse them.

句中同时使用了'though'和'but'，造成重复连接词，应选择其中一个。建议用'although'替换'though'，去掉'but'。

× Yes, I think nothing can bring happiness to people and this is a way good way to express your own attitude to life and sing loudly could help you release from pressure.

✓ Yes, I think nothing can bring happiness to people like singing, and this is a good way to express your own attitude to life. Singing loudly can help you release pressure.

句中'and sing loudly could help you release from pressure'结构不完整，且'could'用法不当，应改为一般现在时。'release from pressure'搭配错误，应为'release pressure'。