唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar errors and making the response more concise. For example, use 'helps' instead of 'help' and avoid redundancy like 'very interesting' and 'fantastic way' together. Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it is an enjoyable way to relax and reduce stress. Moreover, singing helps me improve my vocal skills and express my emotions.

建議: Your answer needs more clarity and completeness. Avoid repeating phrases like 'in my school' twice. Also, complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, explain what steps you learned and how they helped you.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing at school during a special music class. My teachers taught us important techniques such as harmony and breathing control, which improved my singing ability.

建議: Your answer is good and mostly clear. To improve, start with a direct topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid incomplete phrases like 'To sing for.'

範例: I don't want to sing for anyone in particular because singing is a personal hobby. It helps me relieve stress and feel joyful. For instance, after a long day, singing lifts my mood and energizes me.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition errors like 'the the'. Make sure to finish your thoughts and avoid grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons or examples.

範例: In my opinion, singing is a great way to bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and boosts energy. For example, many people feel more positive and relaxed after singing their favourite songs.

× I like singing very much because I find it very interesting and the fantastic way to relax and reduce stress.

✓ I like singing very much because I find it very interesting and a fantastic way to relax and reduce stress.

The article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'fantastic way'. Since 'fantastic way' is a singular countable noun and is being introduced for the first time, the indefinite article 'a' should be used instead of the definite article 'the'.

× Additionally, it also help us to develop our singing skills.

✓ Additionally, it also helps us to develop our singing skills.

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number and person.

× Yes, of course I learned how to sing in my school because in my school there was a special period for singing.

✓ Yes, of course I learned how to sing at my school because at my school there was a special period for singing.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'school'. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to attending or being present at a school.

× My teachers told me several steps of singing like include harmony and the.

✓ My teachers told me several steps of singing, including harmony and more.

The phrase 'like include harmony and the' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Including' is the correct form to introduce examples. Also, 'the' is incomplete and should be replaced with a more appropriate phrase like 'more' or specific examples.

× To sing for. I don't want to sing for anyone in particular because singing is a personal hobby for me.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone in particular because singing is a personal hobby for me.

The fragment 'To sing for.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It should be removed to maintain sentence clarity and correctness.

× It helps people to overcome the stress and feel energized throughout the the day.

✓ It helps people to overcome stress and feel energized throughout the day.

The definite article 'the' before 'stress' is unnecessary because 'stress' is an uncountable noun used in a general sense. Also, 'the the day' contains a repeated article; only one 'the' is needed before 'day'.