唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases which affect naturalness and clarity. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and tell my personal stories. When I sing, I can release my feelings and feel more relaxed. Singing helps me connect with my inner self and share my experiences with others.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Try to give a full, clear response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer logical and avoid unfinished sentences. Also, use appropriate vocabulary related to singing lessons.

範例: Yes, I am currently taking singing lessons from a local coach. She teaches me how to sing properly, including breathing techniques and vocal exercises. These lessons help me improve my singing skills step by step.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks a clear topic sentence. Avoid saying you cannot answer; instead, try to give a direct response. Organize your ideas logically and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific reasons or examples.

範例: I usually sing for my parents because they support me a lot. Although I am not in love now, I believe that love inspires better singing since it brings out strong emotions. Singing for loved ones motivates me to perform well.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear but incomplete at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and provide specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid abrupt endings. Also, expand your vocabulary to express your opinion more effectively.

範例: Absolutely, singing makes me very happy and helps me forget my daily problems. Moreover, I believe music can help people overcome difficulties by lifting their spirits and providing comfort during tough times.

× I uh, took home, I take all my emotions and I uh, explain and uh, get out all my emotions by singing and I tell my story when I sing.

✓ I take home, I take all my emotions and I explain and get out all my emotions by singing and I tell my story when I sing.

The verb 'took' is in the past tense, but the rest of the sentence is in the present tense. To maintain tense consistency, 'took' should be changed to 'take'.

× Recently I'm going to my local coach and she teaches me some.

✓ Recently, I have been going to my local coach and she teaches me some things.

The phrase 'I'm going' suggests a current action, but 'recently' implies a period up to now. The present perfect continuous 'have been going' better expresses this ongoing recent activity. Also, 'some' is incomplete and should be followed by a noun like 'things'.

× she teaches me some. Ways to sing correctly, to breathe correctly, and.

✓ She teaches me some ways to sing correctly and to breathe correctly.

The sentence is fragmented and 'some.' should not be separated from 'ways'. Also, the conjunction 'and' should connect the two infinitive phrases properly without a trailing comma or period.

× I can't answer these questions, uh, because sometimes I think for my mommy, sometimes I sing for my dad.

✓ I can't answer these questions because sometimes I think about my mommy, sometimes I sing for my dad.

The verb 'think' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to someone. 'Think for my mommy' is incorrect; it should be 'think about my mommy'.

× I'm not in love right now, but I think I think, uh, love is the best feeling. Which makes you better singer.

✓ I'm not in love right now, but I think love is the best feeling which makes you a better singer.

The sentence fragment 'Which makes you better singer.' should be connected to the previous sentence. Also, 'a better singer' requires the article 'a' before 'better singer'.

× Absolutely, just for me, singing makes me happy and helps me to forget all the problems I have in my everyday life and I think that music can help people overcome their.

✓ Absolutely, just for me, singing makes me happy and helps me forget all the problems I have in my everyday life, and I think that music can help people overcome their problems.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'their.' which is incomplete. It should be completed with the noun 'problems'. Also, 'helps me to forget' can be simplified to 'helps me forget' for better flow.