唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构不完整，且有重复和停顿。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断断续续，使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me forget things that irritate me. When I sing, I feel happy and relaxed.

建議: 回答中断断续续，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子，并注意语法正确。

範例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. Singing is just a habit for me, and I enjoy the feeling it brings.

建議: 回答中语法错误明显，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议学习主谓一致和完整句子结构，表达时注意逻辑和连贯性。

範例: I want to sing for my mother, especially on her birthday, to wish her a happy birthday.

建議: 回答表达不完整，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议练习使用连接词，使句子更流畅，表达更清晰。

範例: Yes, definitely. I think singing can bring happiness not only to me but also to other people.

× When I singing.

✓ When I am singing.

这里缺少助动词“am”，动词“singing”需要与主语“I”连用时用现在进行时态，结构为“am + 动词-ing”。

× I. Forget the thing which irritated me.

✓ I forget the things that irritate me.

句子结构不完整且时态不一致。根据上下文，应使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作，且“thing”应为复数“things”，关系代词用“that”更自然。

× And I will feel happy and relaxing.

✓ And I will feel happy and relaxed.

“relaxing”是现在分词，表示使人放松的，形容词应为“relaxed”，表示感到放松的状态。

× No, it's just my. Habit.

✓ No, it's just my habit.

句子中间不应有断句，保持连贯完整。

× so I have not to. Learn how to sing.

✓ so I do not have to learn how to sing.

“have to”表示必须，否定形式应为“do not have to”，且“learn”应小写，句子应连贯。

× The people I want to sing for is my mother.

✓ The person I want to sing for is my mother.

“people”是复数，谓语应为“are”，但这里指单一对象“my mother”，应使用单数“person”。

× When it is her birthday, I want to see. Happy birthdays on for her.

✓ When it is her birthday, I want to say happy birthday to her.

句子结构不完整且表达不准确，应使用“say happy birthday to her”表达祝福。

× Yes, definitely. I think not only it can bring happiness to me, but also can bring to the people, I think for.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think not only can it bring happiness to me, but it can also bring happiness to other people.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语，且“people”前缺少限定词，调整语序使句子通顺。