唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'so, so yeah'.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I'm alone at home or in the car because it instantly lifts my mood and helps me relax, reducing my stress.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in middle school. My music teacher taught me practical skills and gave me valuable tips to improve my singing.

建議: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I would like to sing for my parents and close friends because they have always supported me, and I am very grateful to them.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many repetitions and unclear phrases. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it lifts my mood. Moreover, singing together with others helps improve our mood and creates a sense of community.

× Yeah, also because I like singing at as I like singing alone at home in or in the car because it lifts my mood instantly.

✓ Yeah, also because I like singing alone at home or in the car because it lifts my mood instantly.

The phrase 'at as I like singing alone' is incorrect and redundant. Removing 'at as' clarifies the sentence and maintains the correct use of the verb + -ing form 'singing'.

× And when I'm singing alone I always am relaxing and reduce my stress.

✓ And when I'm singing alone, I always relax and reduce my stress.

The phrase 'I always am relaxing' is awkward; 'I always relax' is more natural. Also, 'reduce' should be in present tense to match 'always'. This corrects verb form and tense consistency.

× Yes, well, as far as I can recall. And when I was in middle school, I I learned about how I learned about how to sing from my music teacher.

✓ Yes, well, as far as I can recall. And when I was in middle school, I learned how to sing from my music teacher.

The repetition 'I learned about how I learned about how' is incorrect. Simplifying to 'I learned how to sing' corrects the past tense usage and removes redundancy.

× So it was a really practical skill. So she gave me a lot of valuable tips to.

✓ So it was a really practical skill. So she gave me a lot of valuable tips.

The phrase 'tips to' is incomplete; 'tips' should stand alone or be followed by a verb in -ing form. Removing 'to' corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, well, I don't always choose to my parents or my close friend, because they always supported me, supported me and I always, I always grateful to them.

✓ Well, well, I don't always choose my parents or my close friends, because they have always supported me and I am always grateful to them.

'Choose to my parents' is incorrect; 'choose my parents' is correct. 'Close friend' should be plural 'close friends' to match context. Also, 'I always grateful' lacks verb 'am'. Correcting pronoun and verb usage improves clarity.

× So if I had the chance to song to them, I, I, I choose to.

✓ So if I had the chance to sing to them, I would choose to.

'Song' is a noun; the verb form 'sing' is needed here. Also, conditional sentence requires 'would choose' to express hypothetical action.

× Yes, of course singing. Singing is always lifts my mood and lifts my mood.

✓ Yes, of course singing. Singing always lifts my mood.

'Singing is always lifts' is incorrect; 'Singing always lifts' is correct subject-verb agreement for third person singular.

× So I think generally speaking many people always think about me.

✓ So I think generally speaking many people always think about singing.

The original sentence 'many people always think about me' is likely a mistake; context suggests 'singing' is intended. Correcting the object clarifies meaning.

× So especially when we singing together, it really help it really helpful improve our walk.

✓ So especially when we sing together, it really helps improve our work.

'When we singing' should be 'when we sing' for correct verb form. 'Help it really helpful improve our walk' is incorrect; corrected to 'helps improve our work' for clarity and grammar.