唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi lặp từ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ ngữ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and reduce stress after a long day. Moreover, singing my favorite songs at home makes me feel happy and more confident. It is a great way to express my emotions and have fun simultaneously.

建議: Bạn trả lời tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều của từ "classmate" và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I have. When I was in primary school, I used to take singing lessons with my teacher, which I really enjoyed. These lessons helped me improve my vocal skills and boost my confidence, especially when performing in front of my classmates during school events.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý muốn hát cho mẹ một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn.

範例: I love my mom very much, so I want to sing for her often to show my affection and make her happy.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt với nội dung cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một vài từ vựng phong phú hơn để tăng điểm số.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it elevates their mood and motivation. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs, I feel more relaxed and cheerful. Moreover, singing is a unique way to express emotions and connect with others, which ultimately makes people feel happier.

× I often see my favorite songs at home, which makes which makes me feel happy and more confident.

✓ I often sing my favorite songs at home, which makes me feel happy and more confident.

The verb 'see' is incorrect here because you do not 'see' songs; you 'sing' songs. The phrase 'which makes which makes' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'which makes'. Suggestion: Use the correct verb that fits the context and avoid repetition.

× This lesson helps me improve my vocal skills and boost my confidence, especially when performing in front of my classmate during school events.

✓ This lesson helps me improve my vocal skills and boost my confidence, especially when performing in front of my classmates during school events.

The word 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' because it refers to multiple people in front of whom the student performs. Suggestion: Use plural form when referring to more than one person.

× Oh actually I love my mom very much. I I haven't especially feeling with my mom so I want to sing more and more for my mom because she's my lover.

✓ Oh actually I love my mom very much. I haven't especially expressed my feelings to my mom, so I want to sing more and more for her because she's my beloved.

The phrase 'I haven't especially feeling with my mom' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'I haven't especially expressed my feelings to my mom'. Also, 'she's my lover' is inappropriate in this context; 'she's my beloved' or 'she's my dear' is better. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and appropriate vocabulary to express feelings.