唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains some errors and redundancies. Try to be more concise and correct mistakes like 'thinking' instead of 'singing'. Also, avoid unnecessary details like exact duration unless relevant. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Although I took singing lessons for a few months as a child, I mainly sing for fun now.

建議: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and has minor grammar issues. Try to combine sentences and use linking words to make it more natural and fluent.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was about 8 years old. Although I only took lessons for five or six months, it gave me a basic understanding of singing.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains an unrelated phrase 'A dwarf every thought'. Try to focus on answering directly and avoid confusing or irrelevant phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

範例: I don't have a specific person to sing for, but I enjoy singing with my friends and family during gatherings because it creates a joyful atmosphere.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors. Make sure to express your ideas clearly and use complete sentences. Avoid fragmented phrases and try to explain your opinion with reasons or examples.

範例: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. However, some people may not enjoy singing as much as others.

× I did learn singing when I was a kid but it was not for a long time.

✓ I did learn singing when I was a kid but it was not for a long time.

The sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no correction needed here.

× I learned thinking for around 5:00 to six months and I had to discontinue it due to personal reasons.

✓ I learned singing for around five to six months and I had to discontinue it due to personal reasons.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, '5:00 to six months' is incorrect; it should be 'five to six months' without the colon.

× I have learned how to sing before.

✓ I learned how to sing before.

Using 'have learned' is acceptable but 'learned' simple past fits better with the specific past time reference 'before' and 'when I was 8 years old' in the next sentence.

× It was really long time ago, back when I was 8 years old.

✓ It was a really long time ago, back when I was 8 years old.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'really long time ago'.

× I have learned singing for about 5 to 6 months.

✓ I learned singing for about five to six months.

Use simple past 'learned' to match the past time reference. Also, numbers should be written as words in formal speech. 'Have learned' is less appropriate here.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

The question is correct; no correction needed.

× I don't have anyone specific in mind to sing for but I love singing along with my friends and when I have reunion with my family members it creates such a fun environment and I just enjoy spending time with them singing and dancing.

✓ I don't have anyone specific in mind to sing for, but I love singing along with my friends. When I have a reunion with my family members, it creates such a fun environment, and I just enjoy spending time with them singing and dancing.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. It needs to be split into shorter sentences and commas added for clarity. Also, 'have reunion' should be 'have a reunion'.

× A dwarf every thought.

✓ (This sentence is unclear and seems incorrect; it should be removed or clarified.)

The phrase 'A dwarf every thought' is nonsensical and does not fit the context. It should be removed or rewritten for clarity.

× Definitely. Personally I find thinking. Already happy thing.

✓ Definitely. Personally, I find singing is already a happy thing.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Thinking' should be 'singing'. The sentence needs to be combined for clarity.

× But of course the opinion differs from person to person singing people.

✓ But of course, opinions differ from person to person. Some people enjoy singing while others don't.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs to be restructured for clarity and correctness.