唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 자연스러운 영어 표현을 사용하고, 질문에 직접 답한 후 구체적인 이유를 간결하게 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어, 'I like singing because it helps me relax after a tiring day and express my emotions.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a tiring day. Also, singing allows me to express my emotions and feel refreshed.

建議: 답변이 불명확하고 문장이 완성되지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 과거 경험을 명확히 표현하고, 문장을 완성하여 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I learned how to sing two years ago through online tutorials, but I still feel nervous when singing in front of others.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing two years ago by watching online tutorials. However, I still feel nervous when I sing in front of people.

建議: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 구체적이고 자연스럽게 설명하세요. 예를 들어, 'I want to sing for my boyfriend because it would be a romantic and special moment for us.'라고 표현할 수 있습니다.

範例: I want to sing for my boyfriend because it would create a romantic and special moment for both of us. I've dreamed of doing this since I was young.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 노래가 사람들에게 행복을 주는 이유를 명확하고 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, singing can bring happiness because it reduces stress and lifts people's mood. Many songs inspire and comfort listeners.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

範例: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress and improves their mood. For example, many songs inspire and comfort listeners during difficult times.

× Yes, I love it up when I feel exhausted after working A singing can be filled with fresh unhappy so I also enjoy expressing my emotions through singing and music which is body.

✓ Yes, I love it when I feel exhausted after working. Singing can be filled with fresh energy, so I also enjoy expressing my emotions through singing and music which is good for the body.

The original sentence has incorrect use of verb forms and unclear phrasing. 'Love it up' is incorrect; it should be 'love it'. 'A singing can be filled with fresh unhappy' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be 'Singing can be filled with fresh energy'. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× Yes, before two years ago I learned alot how to sing from my my uh my thing Twitter.

✓ Yes, two years ago I learned a lot how to sing from my Twitter.

The phrase 'before two years ago' is incorrect; 'two years ago' is sufficient. 'Learned alot' should be 'learned a lot'. The repetition 'my my uh my thing Twitter' is unclear and redundant; simplified to 'my Twitter'.

× But I can't give up My thing scares. I don't have enough to.

✓ But I can't give up. My fears scare me. I don't have enough confidence to continue.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'My thing scares' is incorrect pronoun use and unclear meaning. It is corrected to 'My fears scare me'. The last sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× I do like to sing for my boyfriend.

✓ I like to sing to my boyfriend.

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by 'to' when indicating the person you sing for. 'Sing for' is also acceptable but 'sing to' is more common when addressing someone directly.

× I had always dreamed the upper or singing for him since I was young.

✓ I have always dreamed of singing for him since I was young.

The past perfect 'had always dreamed' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have always dreamed' is appropriate for an action continuing to the present. 'The upper or singing' is unclear and corrected to 'of singing'. The preposition 'of' is necessary after 'dreamed'.

× I thought it is better romantic as special moment in for a couple.

✓ I thought it is more romantic as a special moment for a couple.

'Better romantic' is incorrect; 'more romantic' is the correct comparative form. 'In for a couple' is incorrect preposition use; corrected to 'for a couple'. Added article 'a' before 'special moment'.

× Sir, it is my dream.

✓ Sir, it is my dream.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no change.

× Absolutely, I believe by seeing can bring happiness to people because it can reduce stress an lifted their vote.

✓ Absolutely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it can reduce stress and lift their mood.

'By seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. 'Lifted their vote' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'lift their mood'. The verb forms need to be consistent and appropriate.

× For example, many songs have a minimal light and inspire people and helped and label their stress and develop.

✓ For example, many songs have a positive light and inspire people, helping them relieve their stress and develop.

'Minimal light' is incorrect; 'positive light' is more appropriate. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; corrected to a coherent sentence with proper verb forms and conjunctions.